If only I could remember the cadence : /

[naked_burn]

A century below
Awaiting my return
Conversing with these spiteful snakes

My destiny in tow
Unholy secrets learned
How I've missed her subdued grace

I peer through earthen window
My first glimpse of the moon
Her silver face enchanting
Eyes fixed upon my tomb

Comments

[harborer]

i wish i could write notes. i just got an entire melody from this.

[naked_burn]

If you can hum it, I can find it on the guitar. From there I can see if it follows a progression and build from there.

[harborer]

i'm gonna have to try not to forget it.

[naked_burn]

Welcome to my world. I forget more good stuff than I remember. I've written entire songs and just forgotten them...