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TW Fic: Intersecting Geodesics (1/5)

Oct 11, 2009 13:13

Title: Intersecting Geodesics
Author: nancybrown
Rating: R (language, situations, violence)
Spoilers: up through CoE, brief mentions of events from "Pack Animals," "Almost Perfect" and "Lost Souls"
Characters: Ianto, Jack, John, (Eleven and announced companion)
Warnings: Various shades of dub-con, non-descriptive mentions of sex trafficking, character death ( Read more... )

intersections, john_tw, intersecting geodesics, torchwood, jack harkness, ianto jones

Comments 47

hab318princess October 11 2009, 19:04:53 UTC

amazing start - loved the idea of a suit as fetish gear... that was genius!

nancybrown October 11 2009, 20:17:20 UTC

Thanks! When the thought occurred, it was too funny not to share. :)

hab318princess October 11 2009, 20:26:29 UTC

as I said: genius :D

cb_eaglemaniac October 11 2009, 19:21:45 UTC

This is awesome; I'm loving it, and can't wait to read more! =) Your Ianto is brilliant, and I had a roar at this:

Jack's grin was huge now. He wrapped his hand in Ianto's tie. "You're wearing a leash." He tugged, drawing Ianto's neck closer for a kiss. "And you're wrapped up like a present." His fingers went to the buttons of the waistcoat. "If you're not looking for a quick nob, you're dressed wrong, friend."

Fetish gear? This? Suddenly many of his past interactions with Jack made a lot more sense.

...He'd shown up to work every single day wearing clothing with "Fuck me stupid" writ large on them, at least in the language Jack read, and by Jack's request.

LOL. <3

nancybrown October 11 2009, 20:20:25 UTC

:D Thanks! The mental image was too good not to share.

rexluscus October 11 2009, 20:46:29 UTC

This is incredibly intriguing. A perfect Ianto characterization - sneaky, resourceful, yet still a bit innocent - and a perfect young!Jack. (I too lol'd at the unexpected kinkiness of business formal. It does explain a lot.) I can't wait to see where this goes.

nancybrown October 11 2009, 21:22:33 UTC

Thank you for the kind words. :D I'm really having a blast with these particular versions of the characters, and I'm glad you like them as well!

aislingde October 11 2009, 20:51:47 UTC

The start is fantastic. It's hard to wait for the next chapter.

I really love your Ianto. He's smart and escapes the time agency!

The suit as fetisch gear - I laught really hard. Great idea

nancybrown October 11 2009, 21:18:55 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm going to be posting two chapters a day. (It's like this: it's a holiday weekend. Sort of. Some people are looking for things to read, and others don't get access back until Tuesday.)

fide_et_spe October 11 2009, 21:18:54 UTC

Oh I love this so much already. I can't even work out my favourite thing. I adore that Ianto has been wearing fetish gear all this time. I really love the fantasy about the doctor. Can't wait for more.

nancybrown October 11 2009, 21:23:24 UTC

Ianto is not jealous of the Doctor. At all. REALLY. :D