TW/DW Fic: Rescues (1/3)

[nancybrown]

Title: Rescues (1/3)
Author: nancybrownCharacters: Ianto, Steven, Jack, Gwen, various Who and TW characters, OCs

Comments

[rexluscus]

Oooooh this is GOOD, girl. *nailbite*

[nancybrown]

Yay tension! ;)

[coldwater1010]

wow! I'm already hooked.

[nancybrown]

:) Hope you like the rest!

[lone_star_woman]

Interesting... Looking forward to reading more, especially after that last sentence.

[nancybrown]

The last sentence was why this chapter needed to be cut there. :)

[bookwormsarah]

So very bleak, right up until the last sentance which is giving me hope...

[nancybrown]

Now it's a chase. :)

[fide_et_spe]

Aaah glad I'm not the only one who only felt good when a charming smile entered the fray! I think peppers are indeed worms, I'm with Steven on that.

It's totally irrational, but I didn't take to Richard, I think it's probably just that I never take to OC's paired with Ianto, but he's just a bit of a goody two shoes. Although it is a shame that Ianto was wrong and he wouldn't have called the police. I'm glad you gave us the insight into Ianto's thought processes behind his decisions. Poor thing though it is all so bleak.

[nancybrown]

:D I can't stand peppers. (Heartburn, alas.)

Richard is not the most likeable OC I've ever written. He's not a bad person, but (like a lot of people) he's the star of his own private movie about his life. :)

Thanks for pointing out that the thought processes weren't clear in the earlier draft!

[fide_et_spe]

Oh yes, that's a really good description, I must remember that phrase, having some issues with some narcissistic people in my life. I just found him a bit wet and irritating, but those people often are.

I like that you can't stand peppers either, yeah they give me indigestion, and I think that's what put me off them.

[nancybrown]

I just found him a bit wet and irritating, but those people often are.

EXACTLY. :)