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nanirisfic

Fanfic: Hands on Experience Chapter 8: Indecision Part 1

Oct 22, 2010 03:12

Title: Hands on experience. Chapter 8: Indecision Part 1
Pairing: SeiferxZell
Rating: NC-17.
Warning: Nudity, threat of violence, actual violence aggressiveness and…sex, yes there’s also GRAPHIC sex in here. A LOT OF IT Didn’t think that you’d be surprised. You know, swearing should have been in the warning from day one. I have a potty mouth ( Read more... )

seifer, adult content up the wazoo, explicit sexual content, zell, hands on experience, final fantasy 8, slash, humor, nc-17, seiferxzell

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nanirisfic October 23 2010, 01:00:13 UTC

It seems to be trend.

Thanks for delurking, always appreciate feedback.

i_banquet October 22 2010, 09:02:32 UTC

I love this story :)... it just keeps getting better!!!
Please update soon :D

nanirisfic October 23 2010, 01:01:53 UTC

I try to keep it new and interesting as the chapters progress. Thanks for letting me know it's moving on up.

akare_kay October 22 2010, 15:16:41 UTC

That last paragraph... Wow. I mean, the whole thing was fantastic but that
last paragraph... Can't wait for more!

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Yes, this is a totally coherent review :)

nanirisfic October 23 2010, 01:05:03 UTC

Yeah, I peppered metaphors all over the place. Poor Zell has no idea how much he's doing everything Seifer has ever wanted. He has no idea how possessive Seifer gets which each little victory.

Thanks for the review!

heavenscloud666 October 22 2010, 22:09:11 UTC

kyyyaaa!! i m so happy your back!! and with more seifer and zell luvin'!!! you wouldn't believe how happy i am!! don't ever leave again!!lol.

oh. and they finally kisses.. consensually... i cant wait for the next installment!!

*chuu*

nanirisfic October 23 2010, 01:06:51 UTC

I'm happy you're happy! *happy party time* Next part in the works.

yaoi_power October 22 2010, 23:36:34 UTC

I don't think it's possible for you or anyone else to fully comprehend how much of a good mood I'm in simply after seeing the notification that someone had posted a new entry, and then having gone to the site and seen that you had updated this fic. Seriously. And I'm at work, too. I'm sure I've freaked out everybody who's come into the store with my unusually chipper attitude and big cheesy grin.

But OMG consentual kissing?? I never thought I'd see the day! Damn Zell and his trust issues, making this harder for everyone (and by everyone I mean me); JUST LOVE HIM ALREADY!! Though I'm glad there was sexing. Very glad. And scraps of intimacy! LOVE IT! But damn you for that last paragraph, the worst kind of cliffhanger is the type that tricks you into thinking that it isn't one.

Can't wait for the next one! Woo <3

nanirisfic October 23 2010, 01:12:41 UTC

Should put that in my resume: "Improves morale at work."

You see, I tease about the kissing since chapter 1 and several chapter later, it's the best thing ever. Good things comes to those who wait because it sweetens the prize. And it's still day zero, let's hope I can keep the momentum going.

Zell is fuming at your demands! He enjoys the sex, those pesky feelings aren't meant for the Seifer Almasy's of the world.