Actually, I find that sentence to be only semi-horrible. Which is to say, I've written worse myself.
And also actually, I don't think the three rhyming words in that sentence really jump out at you all that much. If you're not consciously looking for them, I can see many readers just plowing through that without catching the pattern. Pretty neat.
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Each truth cut into his skin, leaving a thin line of pain that burned like bad gin.
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Actually, I find that sentence to be only semi-horrible. Which is to say, I've written worse myself.
And also actually, I don't think the three rhyming words in that sentence really jump out at you all that much. If you're not consciously looking for them, I can see many readers just plowing through that without catching the pattern. Pretty neat.
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