!Update!

[narniachick027]

Hey guys! Well Today I got the first Chapter done! Yay for me! it took long enough. Well Everyone review! Please!

Oh and if anyone can come up with a title for it let me know! I open to suggestions.
Oh and right now it's rated pg-13 for mild language. may go up later though.

Comments

[anonymous]

You might want to watch the spelling of names. It's Pogue, not Pouge.

[all_for_who]

Okay so, besides the small mis-spelling of Pogue's name, this was a great chapter. I do have one thing to comment on though, but don't worry it's not a bad thing. Try putting an extra line between new paragraph's and stuff. It just makes it easier for the reader to, um, read.

Besides that, I give you a big thumbs up!

And I luurrvve your tag 'new girl kicking the school prick'. Classic!

[narniachick027]

Yeah after that first comment I went back to the Credits of the movie and saw the correct spelling. But thanks for showing me my errors. I'm not mad but happy that I was told that the spelling of Pogue's name was not what I thought.

Hmmm. And I will, in between paragraphs you say, thanks for the advice. I have never been able to figure that out. I still need a title other than 'The Covenant 2' I need something alomg with it. I just have no flippin' idea what to call it.

Oh and I was lmao about that tag. It was in the story and Caleb gave her kudo's for kicking Aaron. Yeah it was pretty funny. I shall put more 'prick kicking' in the story now. lol. One thing you need to know about Lea is she does not take shit from anyone. Pardon my language. But it tis true. She's kind of model after me. Not entirerly but most of her traits.

Oh and if you'd be kind enough to put a good word in for me at Covenant Fan fic and with your lj friends who like the Covenant. I'd appericate it! I only have like 3 readers. sucks I know. c-ya!

[all_for_who]

That's okay. An author needs to know what others think, it's how we get better and better. In other words, how we get our idea across to a collective group of critics

[narniachick027]

LOL Thanks..

Yeah I have an account but I don't understand how to post anything. It's confusing. I'll try and post it. I'm daughterofipswich1030.

Yeah If you could give me your email I could right you and tell you.It's a bit complicated though.

Oh and guess which three hotties I found on Myspace. Yes Toby, Chace, and Sebastian. Hah and they added me. Lol I was surprised.

ioh and thanks for helping.
love, Kacie

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