The Day He Comes Back In His Suit, 2013 (2/2)

[natsunonamae]

Title: The Day He Comes Back In His Suit, 2013
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sho/Jun
Word count: 13,400
Summary: AU. Sakurai Sho is lost and broken, weary of the past and his hectic Tokyo life. He finds his way back to his hometown to run away from everything. But is he really running away…or discovering a new path?

Part 1

Comments

[guiltyalice]

OMG! I feel really sad for Sho, to have lost Keiko-chan. But meeting Jun, Ohno, Aiba(yet again) seem to have saved him from drowning in a pool of darkness. I really like how you portrayed Sho, Jun, everyone in this fanfic. Everything about this fic is perfect. I might wanna try drawing a fanart based on the "art" in this fic. I love your writing style. I hope to see more stories from you.

Okay, this is the first time I commented on one of your fic, even if I am painfully aware of your fics. Gomen.

[melodyofmysoul]

Fanfiction has never made me cry, but this one has.

Everything's so raw and beautiful. Just...perfection, really. Thank you so much for sharing this.

[su_ede]

This one is a masterpiece. It's in my favourites.

For man is hard to have a lost, harder than for woman, and I could feel the pain of Sho-kun through your fic. But life always gives you new chances, and love can be in any place.

I think I already commented when you published it for the first time, but I never can say enough.

[eiko_lotus]

This is sweet, I like the idea of juntoshi works.
And Sho, poor him but brave for making new step for GIS life.
Thanks for sharing... :)

[anonymous]

This is truly beautiful. You hit all the right notes. The desperation and sadness
This really is full of feelings. So raw and sweet.
Amazing!