Comments | naughty_newyear: Fic for Unbroken_Halo by Adele

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Fic for Unbroken_Halo by Adele_Sparks The Possibilities are Endless

Jan 04, 2006 12:16

First off, may I say "Holy Mother of God!" ? Because...well, I was more or less posting these babies in the order I received them, but I just got this one last night, and it's so smouldering hot and sweet and funny and...I must share. Immediately. Also, I've decided to do a little rec type of thing for each fic from now on. I'm in charge, that's ( Read more... )

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jadzia7667 January 4 2006, 22:26:08 UTC

This is marvelous and possibly the only realistic three way I've ever read. Good job :)

hergunfight January 4 2006, 23:09:44 UTC

Wonderful, wonderful stuff. I don't know what it is about this Trio but I love it! Its because they both want to take care of Harry and for me thats important!

lishel_fracrium January 4 2006, 23:27:51 UTC

Oh wow! that was so fucking hot!!! so will there be a next time? *bg* absoloutely loved this,thanks for writing it.

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lishel_fracrium January 6 2006, 00:09:53 UTC

oh yeah defintely. *drools* *bg*

reddwarfer January 5 2006, 01:05:56 UTC

You made it so real. And dealt with all the things that normally make me eschew the threesome fics. I love you for it.

Leila

unbroken_halo January 5 2006, 01:25:29 UTC

OMG!!! I need clean clothes now. I am speechless. Well no I ain't exactly speechless cause guh and gah and O.M.F.G.! I think I am going to need a few minutes alone. *big sighs*lights cigarette*

OK I loved that it wasn't easy for Harry to tell Severus and I loved that Severus' fantasies all involved Harry. The arguments were realistic and the feelings on edge, perfect. I loved the fact that Remus said he didn't no much about it yet admitted later on they should have had a plan. Seems that the pervy werewolf strikes again. Oh gods I can barely think as I write this.

Hot and sweet and sensual and all that rolled into one. Guh! Damn I think you broke me. Cause now I can't shut up.Thank you Thank you Thank you. This was perfect and you are a goddess!