Fic for Unbroken_Halo by Adele_Sparks The Possibilities are Endless

[the_con_cept]

First off, may I say "Holy Mother of God!" ? Because...well, I was more or less posting these babies in the order I received them, but I just got this one last night, and it's so smouldering hot and sweet and funny and...I must share. Immediately. Also, I've decided to do a little rec type of thing for each fic from now on. I'm in charge, that's

Comments

[everythingisaid]

Oh, I loved this fic! I have never shied away from reading threesomes, but, strangely, by the end of this fic, while I found the three of them v. enticing and hot together, I was hoping that they wouldn't do it again! I don't know what's wrong with me! This fic almost had me in tears at different parts, because you really convey the realistic feelings that must come with a threesome: jealousy, awkwardness, being overwhelmed, etc. Something really touched me emotionally, and so by the end of the fic, while Snape and Harry dealt with their feelings and were ready for a "next time," I'm still sitting here thinking, "No! I want it to be just Snape and Harry!" And it's weird, because like I said, I usually have no problems with threesomes! I don't know--I'm way too emotional lately because I still feel like crying! I hope you take everything I've written as compliments--because that's how I mean them. I really enjoyed this fic, a lot.

[stellahobbit]

Is it wrong that I want to be Harry after reading that?

[minnow_53]

I'm incredibly impressed with the way you worked out the logistics for the threesome! Though this isn't my OTP (or OT3!) I really enjoyed the story, especially the way you combined the emotional with the physical. I also liked the way your characters actually discussed their experiences afterwards, which was realistic and gave the story an extra dimension.

^_^

[psyfic]

Oh, that was *so* good. Like a long tall glass of iced tea on a hot summer day. :) I loved the SS/HP dynamics and the tentativeness to start of the trio sex, very realistic. Great Severus snark and the touches of humour made it very enjoyable. Nice job!

[anmkosk]

Wow, that was incredibly realistic. Great writing :)