Comments | naughty_newyear: Fic for Unbroken_Halo by Adele

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Fic for Unbroken_Halo by Adele_Sparks The Possibilities are Endless

Jan 04, 2006 12:16

First off, may I say "Holy Mother of God!" ? Because...well, I was more or less posting these babies in the order I received them, but I just got this one last night, and it's so smouldering hot and sweet and funny and...I must share. Immediately. Also, I've decided to do a little rec type of thing for each fic from now on. I'm in charge, that's ( Read more... )

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painless_j January 5 2006, 19:34:30 UTC

I liked the dynamic between them! It looked very real. Thank you, it was a really enjoyable reading.

Ah, right, but for one thing: come/cum issue. While I agree with most slashers here that "cum" isn't a word and is used by guys at fora where they write things like "and then I made her choke on my hot cum!", I wouldn't mind it in this story that much if it were your chosen spelling. But I see that you spell it as "come" too, so why not spell it this way throughout the entire story?

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the_con_cept January 5 2006, 23:39:31 UTC

Aye aye! *salutes* Actually, my first thought was to point out that this was more the beta's fault than yours...*sigh*, so I DID intend to fix it eventually!

pearls_x_pills January 5 2006, 21:07:05 UTC

Please tell me we get to see "encounter the second"

That was hot. I LOOOOVE ss/hp/rl.

Severus is so sexy, and snarky
remus is so, well, comforting, and remus-like.
and harry is so bloody adorable.

its the best of all worlds.

lupinella January 25 2006, 22:17:29 UTC

Okay - who did these f-ing hilarious icons - it's like me, but w/ comp. skillz and better humour.

pearls_x_pills January 26 2006, 01:24:45 UTC

laurel_tx on livejournal.. :P

dreamyraynbo January 5 2006, 23:41:59 UTC

Another! Another!!! :P

Wow. This was not only hot but so beautiful. Threesomes are difficult situations where things have the potential to go seriously wrong, but the respect between these three definitely made this a wonderful experience. Snape and Harry isn't my otp, but there relationship was surprisingly realistic. Tossing Lupin into the mix - guh ;P

So, yeah...Another!!! :D

gertrudeflint January 6 2006, 00:54:47 UTC

Harry hovered around them like a lascivious buzzard - oh, that line made me laugh! One of the best bits about this fic is the gentle humor you've mixed in with the sex and emotions.

Very enjoyable, hot and satisfying, particularly the SS/RL after Snape's initial doubts. And your demanding Harry is a delight. You should definitely write more threesomes! *g*

*wild applause* loupgarou1750 January 7 2006, 08:56:14 UTC

oh, well done! that was just lovely! (and I say that not being a huge Snape/Harry/Lupin fan) Like others, I am very impressed with your ability to have realism without losing the pornotechnics. I particularly liked the twitchiness of the beginning of their evening as a threesome it felt uncomfortably familiar :) and the way you smoothly sequed into hot smut. Very nice.