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Fic for Unbroken_Halo by Adele_Sparks The Possibilities are Endless

Jan 04, 2006 12:16

First off, may I say "Holy Mother of God!" ? Because...well, I was more or less posting these babies in the order I received them, but I just got this one last night, and it's so smouldering hot and sweet and funny and...I must share. Immediately. Also, I've decided to do a little rec type of thing for each fic from now on. I'm in charge, that's ( Read more... )

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maddiec24 January 8 2006, 17:02:27 UTC

This is one of the best threesomes I have *ever* read. Hot and sweet and funny. Harry is a lucky boy! Now I'll do what I always do when I read a great story - - beg for a sequel! Please?

lore January 9 2006, 19:30:28 UTC

Read and enjoyed. Skillfully written. :)

love, lore

lupinella January 25 2006, 22:20:39 UTC

I've always admired your taste... and your icons!

lore January 25 2006, 22:35:30 UTC

*blush* Well, thank you very much! I get strange notions sometimes, and they must be iconed. :D

love, lore

lupinella January 25 2006, 22:30:56 UTC

Okay - Beautiful! - How much do I enjoy this trio?!
Now admittedly my OT3 is Remus/Arthur/Neville - er, but no one will write it. (Someone, please write this - you would make me the happiest perv in the world!)
I LURVE!!! this trio, but as I always worry about my Remus, I want him to be in the primary relationship. You made it wonderful - reminded me, in a blissful, wankful way of Scribbulus Ink's 'Cherry Bomb' series, but ass-backward. In a good way. You made them human and so damned realistic that when Harry left to drink wine, spitefully, I yelled at my screen. Thank you for making me lose my sanity. I adore your human touch. Very realistic, yet HAWT! (Excuse the fangirliness - I admire you on an artistic - Oh WTF wanktastic level!)

djin7 February 5 2006, 10:00:35 UTC

I've only just caught up, and wow. Very hot, and emotionally tense. I love how fragile Severus is at first, but then his 'protect/make Harry happy' mode kicks in, and he takes charge. Lovely.

Excellent work! My OT3! Hee.

Cheers!

wow anonymous February 11 2006, 17:26:59 UTC

This is really fabulous, from beginning to end. As others have said, I really like that you deal with the awkwardness (both physical and emotional) inherent in threesomes -- from the very beginning, when they're all just sitting there drinking wine and wondering what's supposed to happen (and whether they're allowed to laugh!), to Harry's "tantrum" and mixed feelings about the whole thing. Snarry usually isn't my thing, but I like the way you've written them -- and I love your Remus. Always the quiet ones indeed! Definitely adding this to my favorites.