Comments | neathsunnyskies: See, I still write stuff

neathsunnyskies

See, I still write stuff

Oct 30, 2010 11:46

How to Fall Apart - 6000 words, H/D, PG-13, minor character death, angst - this is how it ends.

( “That’s mine,” Harry said. )

fic, harry potter, h/d

Comments 17

allmysins November 14 2010, 00:06:09 UTC

"I don't love you anymore, Harry."- Cue tears.

neathsunnyskies November 14 2010, 19:34:12 UTC

I know, that line was probably the hardest to write in this entire piece! It kept not wanting to come out, and I kept thinking that I was just a terrible person! Thank you for reading!

sajmalfoy13 November 14 2010, 00:19:35 UTC

Oh wow. This was beautifully written. Thanks! :)

neathsunnyskies November 14 2010, 19:34:26 UTC

Oh, thank you!

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neathsunnyskies November 14 2010, 19:35:34 UTC

It's not wrong at all! This was possibly the worst happy ending on the planet because even though technically they moved on, I certainly haven't! Thank you for reading!

ladykatie7 November 14 2010, 02:07:13 UTC

I am completely speechless. This was beautiful!

neathsunnyskies November 14 2010, 19:36:10 UTC

Oh, thank you! Speechlessness is possibly the best compliment I could ever get :). Thank you for reading!

ffaddict89 November 14 2010, 02:41:14 UTC

Aww so good! Very well written. Sad and not the typical ending, but a happy ending all the same.

neathsunnyskies November 14 2010, 19:37:06 UTC

Thank you! I know, it's a bit of a double-edged happy ending, isn't it? I kept wanting them to get back together, but it just didn't feel right here :(. Thank you for reading!