The Life You Never Had

Nov 23, 2009 20:41

Title:The Life You Never Had
Author: needed_beauty
Rating: PG
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
POV:Arthur
Summary: He sees their life together flash before his eyes, the moments coming back to him like a silent movie.
Disclaimer: Not mine, never gonna be.
Author Notes: Eh, it's sad? Idk why I wrote it.

The Life You Never Had )

rating: pg, fanfic: standalone, fic: merlin, pairing: arthur/merlin

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Comments 16

lily_kohai November 23 2009, 15:46:44 UTC
o_o T_T

I love the last part. So very simple and heart breaking, without too much drama, it's perfectly sad o_o

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needed_beauty November 24 2009, 05:43:25 UTC
Awws!

Thank you so much!

I'm not really sure if it has the correct effect, though...that it didn't come out sad enough.

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bookwormvicky November 23 2009, 19:39:32 UTC
*Sniffles* So sad! Oh god, then the end quotes... it undid me. I adored the way that Merlin knew about everything, about Arthur dying, without having to be told. Oh god, the end... my heart was breaking for him as he talked to Arthur, and the engagement ring... Merlin wasn't the only one crumbling to pieces, and I did adore that description.

Incedible.

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needed_beauty November 24 2009, 05:47:52 UTC
Oh I hope I didn't cause actual sniffles.
D:

But I'm glad you liked it!
:D

Thank you so so much for your wonderful comment!
:D

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frames_in_aria November 24 2009, 10:32:59 UTC
I think my heart just broke ;A; Your fic was quite brutal in cutting my heart, especially with the ending, and I may need to hunt some fluffy sappy fics right now *whimper* Nevertheless, great job!

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needed_beauty February 20 2010, 08:26:19 UTC
Awwws!

Thank you so so much!

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prncss_keroline November 25 2009, 08:21:22 UTC
Well, congratulations on officially breaking my heart. That was beautiful and bittersweet and pretty much the best thing that's happened to me today.
Oh, and the last section. KILLED ME in the best possible way.
:runs off to cuddle something:

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needed_beauty February 20 2010, 08:27:18 UTC
*hands you a giant teddy bear to cuddle*

I am so sorry for breaking your heart!

But thank youuuu!!!
:D
:D

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silentpoetry1 November 28 2009, 15:23:52 UTC
Ohhh, that was so sad! ;_; I would shed a few tears if I didn't have to stay awake. Gorgeous job! <3

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needed_beauty February 20 2010, 08:27:54 UTC
Awwies!

Thank you, bb!
:D

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