Fic: "Rituals", Johnny/Evan, NC-17

Jun 17, 2010 00:12

Title: Rituals
Pairing: Johnny/Evan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: BDSM
Length: 9500 words

Beta'd by strongplacebo

Everything Evan did more than once before a successful competition became part of his crazy rituals for the season. He'd been collecting those for as long as Johnny had known him: lighting his special candles, chewing blue gum, applying his ( Read more... )

my fic, figure skating

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strongplacebo June 16 2010, 23:43:53 UTC
I love love love this and it is so hot :DDD

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neery June 17 2010, 20:23:13 UTC
Thank you so much. :D

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miss_saigon June 16 2010, 23:46:26 UTC
*_____________________*

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neery June 17 2010, 20:23:38 UTC

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harriet_vane June 17 2010, 00:13:19 UTC
I am utterly starry eyed with delight. I love how Johnny works out what Evan likes, but it's a back-and-forth between them, with neither of them entirely certain how it will work out. And I love the end, which is snarky and hopeful and GREAT.

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neery June 17 2010, 20:24:00 UTC
Thank you very much! :D

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aesvir June 17 2010, 00:16:48 UTC
I love the uncertainty in this, that they both don't really know what they are doing and have "jumped in the deep end" like the adorable fools they are. I also love Johnny's self-awareness, how he's scared by his own cruelty but also really into the situation.

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neery June 17 2010, 20:24:21 UTC
Thank you very much!

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messengerhatta June 17 2010, 00:35:43 UTC
I AM SO THRILLED RN

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neery June 17 2010, 20:25:02 UTC
Thank you!

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