Fic: "Rituals", Johnny/Evan, NC-17

Jun 17, 2010 00:12

Title: Rituals
Pairing: Johnny/Evan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: BDSM
Length: 9500 words

Beta'd by strongplacebo

Everything Evan did more than once before a successful competition became part of his crazy rituals for the season. He'd been collecting those for as long as Johnny had known him: lighting his special candles, chewing blue gum, applying his ( Read more... )

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ncc_gqmf June 17 2010, 01:02:49 UTC

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neery June 17 2010, 20:25:17 UTC
LOLOLOL

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lirielviridian June 17 2010, 01:07:19 UTC
Um. UNF. Will probably leave more coherent feedback once I'm at least a bit over the whole 'hot damn' phase.

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neery June 17 2010, 20:27:03 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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itsthequietone June 17 2010, 01:15:34 UTC
Whooooaaa. I didn't even know that I wanted this, but it is scary how much I love your Johnny and Evan - your Evan especially. I love how unsure they are, and Evan's vulnerability is amazing! Job well done on the relationship dynamics.

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neery June 17 2010, 20:27:30 UTC
Aww, thank you! :)

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la_sipota June 17 2010, 01:29:44 UTC
SO AWESOME. I love the uncertainty on both sides, Evan's douchiness, etc. I wouldn't mind more in this universe!

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neery June 17 2010, 20:27:52 UTC
Thank you so much!

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jackycomelately June 17 2010, 01:32:29 UTC
This is really really awesome! I like how Johnny's hostility toward Evan ebbs and flows. I like how Evan tries to be stoic and resists aftercare. I think Johnny's experimental bent in bed is very in character and an interesting twist on his creative mind. The story is also very very hot!

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neery June 17 2010, 21:53:58 UTC
Thank you very much!

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