Comments | neery: Fic: "Rituals", Johnny/Evan, NC-17

neery

Fic: "Rituals", Johnny/Evan, NC-17

Jun 17, 2010 00:12

Title: Rituals
Pairing: Johnny/Evan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: BDSM
Length: 9500 words

Beta'd by strongplacebo

Everything Evan did more than once before a successful competition became part of his crazy rituals for the season. He'd been collecting those for as long as Johnny had known him: lighting his special candles, chewing blue gum, applying his ( Read more... )

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kalpurna June 17 2010, 01:56:12 UTC

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neery June 17 2010, 21:54:32 UTC

♥

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neery June 17 2010, 21:54:59 UTC

Thank you very much!

perculious June 17 2010, 03:14:25 UTC

This is, like, the exact fic I wanted from this fandom, and someone finally wrote it so exactly how I wanted it. :DDDDD I'M SO PLEASED.

neery June 17 2010, 21:55:22 UTC

:DD Thank you so much!

nova33 June 17 2010, 03:15:23 UTC

I love how unsure they both are, like they're testing their own limits and each other's. I especially liked the way Johnny kept checking with Evan, the way he was sort of concerned despite himself.

neery June 17 2010, 21:55:40 UTC

Thank you! :D

nikibee June 17 2010, 03:25:08 UTC

OMG THIS IS AMAZING. This is such a perfect Johnny/Evan fic. I feel like this could have really happened. You capture them so perfectly! I kept trying to cut and paste parts that really resonated but then I ended up with almost the whole thing copied so I gave up. But I love flaily Johnny slapping Evan because he doesn't know what else to do, and then their fight agreeing to do more, "FINE I'll SLAP YOU" "FINE!" "FINE!" And then the "2 more times" line because Evan WOULD do that. And how Evan had to be on his knees and he automatically crossed his wrists behind his back. And offered to blow Johnny. And how it became one of his rituals. And then later when Evan comes to Johnny and offers to do it just for fun, not for a competition. And the hair pulling. And Johnny backing off to give Evan a chance to think about the sex part before he continued. And making Evan blush and ask for what he wanted. AND COMING ON HIS FACE! And Evan NOT WANTING TO WIPE THE CUM OFF! And the clothespin. And the cock slapping. And Johnny being all protective ( ... )

neery June 17 2010, 21:56:48 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much, that is such a great comment to read. I'm sop glad there were so many things that worked for you in the fic. ♥