Comments | nenyaentwhistle: FIC: The Year After, "Another Long Week"

nenyaentwhistle

FIC: The Year After, "Another Long Week"

Jan 16, 2006 00:49

Series: The Year After
Title: Another Long Week
Pairing: HP/SS
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4,165
Beta: djin7
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter and am making no profit.
Note: This is loosely based on the events that will happen in Book Seven. The series is a work of vignettes set in the same universe. Also please read The Snape Holiday first.
Summary: ( Read more... )

the year after

Comments 27

ashenv January 15 2006, 17:08:01 UTC

Oh thank you so much, I loved it! Very IC, for both of them, and that was what made this such a great read I think. I don't think it needs more clarification, but then again I prefer stories like this, where all is not just spelled out. Great story, and hot too! Thanks again!

nenyaentwhistle January 16 2006, 07:34:28 UTC

i try to do IC, not sure if i necessarily succeed but it's nice that you think so. well life isn't spelled out and i try to be realistic (even if it is fanfiction). i also try to write stuff i'll actually read.

O.o!!! quetzalli January 15 2006, 18:48:37 UTC

Always I read a fic of your I lost the track of time, and my mind en the world you create.

I must be confess... my english is dreadful but that´s not and wall in my reading.

I have been reading you since The Stockholm Syndrome and The Sandglass, and I love every single moment, it´s a sadness I can read more than chapter 6 of the Sndglass, but I don´t want let go the oportuniti of congratulete you and now I found this work of yours and I have to read it.

See you.

Re: O.o!!! nenyaentwhistle January 16 2006, 07:33:44 UTC

lol!!! your english is fine if you can read this and understand it. i'm not known for being easy to understand. and i know The Sandglass is not an easy read. i'm glad you like my stuff :). not many do.

accio_kilt January 15 2006, 21:38:46 UTC

I like both stories!!

nenyaentwhistle January 16 2006, 07:31:34 UTC

thanks!

aureliades January 15 2006, 23:44:11 UTC

I liked this, but I was also confused and just in generla kind of stumped. I will definitely have to read this again with a more analytical mindset turned on to really feel like I"ve gotten whatever you're saying. And that's good because it's been far to long since I read anything that made me think, but at the same time I rather want to bash you over the head and yell "speak plainly damn you!"

nenyaentwhistle January 16 2006, 07:31:23 UTC

well you're confused b/c it's told in harry's POV (limited though, not necessarily in his voice), but he's also confused and he generally doesn't know where this relationship is going and the clear definitions of it. it's just another way of telling a story, i suppose and it's been what i've been experimenting for a while. read it again and things will become clearer in the beginning b/c i start to divulge more later on.

Loved it! slash_stalker January 16 2006, 04:20:18 UTC

Such a dysfunctional relationship, but it works! Of course they know it does, but would Severus ever admit to it? Harry shouldn't really need words if Severus' actions speak for him, but then he's young and wants to hear it.

I loved the bit re Severus drooling - reminds me of my partner! Those sorts of touches make a fic real.

Re: Loved it! nenyaentwhistle January 16 2006, 07:30:03 UTC

haha, the drooling bit was inspired by somethign i put in a story last time, where Snape snores (b/c of his big nose). i thought that putting drooling would be something different and according to an old boyfriend, i drooled :). it's one of my many gross/cute aspects.

of course snape wouldn't admit to another, but harry knows everything is okay and yet he still would like to hear it w/o asking for it. you know *sighs* BOYS!!!