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nerv_lambert

City of Sin 5/??

Mar 07, 2010 15:42

Title: City of Sin
Author: dementedrainbow
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 709
Summary: New York, the city of sins welcomes Lea, Dianna, Heather and Naya. Dianna gets into New York's mood so quick? We'll see.

( 'Cause the voodoo that you do is all that you can do to make me into your fool )

Comments 6

jbluish March 7 2010, 14:35:48 UTC

I reeeeeally wish I could read this right now but I'm kind of in a hurry cause I'm going to the movies to watch Alice :D

Sooo I just dropped byyy to left a comment to my LJLover and I promise to read this as soon as I get home :D

nerv_lambert March 7 2010, 16:26:38 UTC

Haha, Take your time, bb. Enjoy the movie! I heard it's siiiiiick.

jbluish March 7 2010, 20:50:32 UTC

We kind of had a money problem and didnt see the movie, we ended up eating mc'flurry ice cream at mc'donald's lol xD but hey now i'm here and this was sooo sweet that i want someone to propose to me aswell haha

are you planning on writing the wedding aswell? i can only imagine heather in her happy self searching for dresses for them lol :D

nerv_lambert March 7 2010, 21:01:30 UTC

Already planning the wedding scene in my mind. It's not complete yet but it's getting there. :D

spashley20 March 7 2010, 23:53:15 UTC

super super adorable :)

wizemunkee006 March 15 2010, 22:00:19 UTC

So... yeah, I'm commenting out of order because I just commented on part 7, but I went back and reread this one because it's so damn sweet (makes me want to go snuggle with my boy). Anyway... I'm commenting now because as much fin as lurking is, I know that comments are like crack to writers (or at least they are for me), so I'm commenting now in hopes that you'll be extra motivated to write and have part 8 up really soon. Good plan, I know.

Anyway, on with the commenting.... totally, absolutely adorable. I love this whole story so far, and I'm sure it's only getting sweeter and fluffier and better. And I can totally see Dianna being all, "Let's go home, but first let's blow out all these candles." Because you know, only Dianna can prevent forest fires... with rainbows.