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neverknew_xo

Show Me What I'm Looking For

Apr 26, 2009 20:09

Chapter Title: Secret Oath 2/?
Author: neverknew_xo
Rating: T
Pairing: House/Cameron
Warnings: just the angst again ;)
Summary: House finds out Cameron is engaged to Chase and goes to her for a confrontation.

( Tonight I made a secret oath to keep chasing after to you, and I am not going to stop whether you like it or not. )

fanfiction, house/cameron, house

Comments 17

sharp2799 April 27 2009, 02:01:18 UTC

“Dr. Allison Chase,” He addressed her harshly, the words coming out of his mouth like poison. “That has a speck of disdain in it, don’t you think?”

You know, I had to read that twice because my brain didn't (or couldn't!) process the name change! LOL

I wish this would really happen though.

neverknew_xo April 29 2009, 21:24:52 UTC

LOL! Yeah honestly when I was first writing it I had to step back and make sure I didn't just write her name!

And I really wish this was happening too. The show just isn't what it used to be and I don't know if you saw the last episode but it was pretty disapointing. Thanks for reading though :)

mswooster April 27 2009, 09:19:31 UTC

This made me cry! Stupid House for not doing something sooner and poor House at the same time for hurting like that!

neverknew_xo April 29 2009, 21:26:38 UTC

Aw well I'm sorry I made you cry! But I'm glad you liked it. And I agree, if only House realized this before the engagement! Thanks for the comment :D

ally_cam April 27 2009, 15:30:24 UTC

“Dr. Allison Chase,”
Ugh, it's even nastier when reading it... Doesn't look and sound right, does it? Brilliant writing, and I really hope, House will give us a reaction like that on the show too - I'm afraid we'll be disappointed on that one again, but still there's hope left...

neverknew_xo April 29 2009, 21:34:41 UTC

Thank you! And no, it really doesn't sound right at all, that's something I noticed while writing it, it just didn't feel right either. And I hoped for that too in the last episode but the writers are still sticking to their crazy ideas so who knows. But wow thank you so much, I really appreciate your comment! :)

wfugrad April 28 2009, 00:57:05 UTC

Great update ! I much prefer your fic to the show, sad to say.

neverknew_xo April 29 2009, 21:35:22 UTC

Thank you so much! And sadly fanfiction is the only thing getting me through this season so I know how you feel too.

ar06e21 April 28 2009, 04:15:59 UTC

“I’m starting my future House, the only thing I’m giving up on is ours.”

Best line. It really sums up her moving on with Chase because House is too chicken to say anything about how he really feels :-/

I really enjoy reading this fic and hope that you continue it :) You do an awesome job.

neverknew_xo April 29 2009, 21:36:49 UTC

Thank you! That line actually popped into my head first and its what gave me the idea for the whole story. And I completely agree that House is too chicken to admit how he really feels. I just wish he would already! Thanks so much again, I really appreciate your comment! ♥

ar06e21 April 30 2009, 02:50:00 UTC

I think it's funny how one line can warp into an entire story :)