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2ndnightshift June 16 2010, 05:25:34 UTC
People hit you. Am I right?

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neverplays June 16 2010, 05:32:47 UTC
Most of the time I hit them first.

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2ndnightshift June 16 2010, 05:51:27 UTC
Why?

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neverplays June 16 2010, 05:56:42 UTC
Because they're bad guys.

Because they're mean to me.

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child_radical June 16 2010, 05:50:52 UTC
Considering that some of the Deities seem to have a few screws loose, you might actually get a coin.

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neverplays June 16 2010, 05:57:01 UTC
What's wrong with it?

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child_radical June 16 2010, 06:02:55 UTC
You're more than likely going to have people stating that you should've gone more in depth.

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neverplays June 16 2010, 06:04:42 UTC
It's in depth enough. Not everything needs a specific example!

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This comment does not exist prefers_chess June 16 2010, 06:34:02 UTC
[Under normal circumstances, Rudy would drop in briefly to provide insightful commentary on the relative literary merit of Mindy's composition. But alas, being that he is currently incorporeal and way too tired from haunting people to attempt to check the Network, he cannot.

For what it's worth, he would've rated it partial marks. Strong thesis statement, could use further expansion of the body and conclusion.]

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and this mun has action tags to get back to neverplays June 16 2010, 06:56:18 UTC
[ That's pretty good, considering that writing's never been a focal point of her education.

However, the quality of her essay reflects her reluctance to give more to the deities. She's not a trained monkey. ]

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audio; aregulargirl June 16 2010, 08:56:08 UTC
I don't think they're necessarily looking for length with these.

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audio; sleep now. ;_; neverplays June 16 2010, 08:58:34 UTC
I bet they don't read them.

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audio; me too, actually. lol 5am. :[ aregulargirl June 16 2010, 09:21:14 UTC
I don't know about that. There's been a few too many times times where stuff that was meant to stay private became public somehow. Either they want to read it or they want everyone else to.

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audio; neverplays June 16 2010, 17:58:42 UTC
Either way, I'm not their trained monkey! I think this essay is good enough, and if they don't agree, they can go suck on it.

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lastpunchline June 16 2010, 15:57:52 UTC
You're getting a job, kid?

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neverplays June 16 2010, 17:57:44 UTC
That's right. I want more things.

[ ... Only Eddie knows what these things are. ]

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lastpunchline June 16 2010, 18:10:51 UTC
Fair enough. Do what you want.

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private neverplays June 16 2010, 18:25:41 UTC
We had a whole room of weapons at home, every wall lined with guns. You have a secret compartment like that?

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