"STEALING A MOMENT" BY CATC20 STRONG ADULT CONTENT

[catc20]

 Title: "Stealing A Moment"
Author: Cath
Pairing: Nathan/Haley
Rating: Strong Adult Rated
Disclaimer: Don't own a thing. :)
Word Count: 2,422
Spoilers/Warnings: Future one shot, set 6 years after Season 4 finale, No spoilers. :) Strong Sexual Content.
Summary: With two small children, Nathan and Haley make the most of whatever alone time they can get and

Comments

[jllover05]

Oh my goodness Cathy that was hot :) I love reading fics when Naley can't get enough of each other and just have to go at it regardless of where they are. You so didn't dissapoint. I agree with Dawn about loving that you stepped out of the "comfort zone" Rough sex between Naley is always hot and I am glad you wrote it!! I hope you enter the next challenge :)

Ashley

[catc20]

Eek, I love your icon, that tuck just showed how different Nathan was and how much he cared for Haley unlike any other girl, just that one simple gesture.

Thank you so much for the review, I love how much we all love any kind of NH lovi'. We're some dirty girls. Hehe.

[jllover05]

:) Thanks! I love your icon too! I pretty much love any NH icon lol. And yes we are some dirty girls ;)

[elleisforlovee]

Amazing 3.13 reference. I love future NH. They make me smileee =]

[catc20]

Thank you so much for the feedback, I can't ever look at the hood of any car without flashing to NH, especially when it's raining. LOL

[laalaalustsdior]

*THUD* That was such an insanely hot fic that I still am at a loss for words. I'm in need of a cold drink after reading this one!!

This fic was pure perfection Cath, from every every viewpoint. I loved how you introduced Nathan in to the story by showing his caring and family guy-self. A definite turn on when a guy knows how to handle himself around children. Mischievous Jamie was too cute for words; I can't wait to see how the real Jamie(Jackson) interacts with his parents. The sex...well, even their little fun in the car leading up to the sex was scorching. Everything from the dirty talk to dominant Nathan was mind-blowingly hot. Can't wait to read more.

[catc20]

Gah, I can't wait to see Jamie either. I'm dying for just one pic of him with his Mommy and Daddy.

Jackson/Jamie just has the too cute for words appeal where you know he gets away with murder and having Nathan as a father you know he mimicks him. Haha.

[lorilozz]

*squeal* It's so exciting to see that you've entered this challenge Cath. For a while there I thought it was going to be just myself and Diane! *lol*

I absolutely love that you've taken the smut to a different place in this fic. I love me some tender Naley nookie, but we all know that sometimes they just gotta get down and dirty, and it takes a talented writer to show... how do I put this? - intense fucking, rather than sweet and slow lovemaking. So well done, you definitely pulled it off. Yes, pun intended! *lol*

The wonderfull family stuff at the beginning was perfection, with a cheeky Jamie, an adorable new Scott family addition and of course - Grandpa Whitey! He made my day. The costume idea you chose was really different and very sexy. I'm still picturing Nathan in that outfit and trying to decide whether to laugh or drool.

Great job with this and I hope you have time to enter in future challenges. - Lori

[catc20]

Hehe, I can't believe I took this long to enter, I will never ever not enter again, I love this community so. . Eek and I'm just catching up on reading but can I just say Nathan is chaps OMG. Gah,the Texas girl in me died at that. Haha.I'll stop now bc I want to leave u a proper review.

Haha, and I love your "puns". I really wanted to show the intense love they have and how family focused but they still get down and dirty bc that passion never wavers.

Actually I have to thank my cousin Mimi, who married at 18 to her high school sweetheart and ten years later that have a 6 year old and a 2 year old and she always tell me they find time anywhere they can take it. The slow and sweet just doesn't happen when you have to small kids demanding your attention. Quickies become a way of life. Haha.

[pinky_supergirl]

Oh Cath, that was pure brilliance. I loved that they've got a little girl, and the little guest appearance by Whitey was perfect. The sex was so Hotttt, on the hood of the car... ah, if only it were raining, lol.

Oh, my daughter wanted me to say 'thanks a lot Cath, it's your fault mum burnt dinner', coz i was so engrossed in your fic i didn't get up to turn the chicken over even though i could smell it burning... lol.

Brilliant fic cath, you're awesome! *hugs*