That the Moon Elbowed the Stars 14/17

[nicalyse]

Title: That the Moon Elbowed the Stars
Chapter: 14/17
Rating: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 7,900
Summary: And maybe it's an awful thing to think, but he wonders what's worse for her, losing New York or losing her dad.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

[nicalyse]

You're exactly right, darling.

[mvp]

OMG!!! I thought we were already past the heartache!!
WHy are you doing this to me!!!
You better fix this!! and Fix it soon!!

[nicalyse]

There's always room for my heartache. ;)

[breadtana]

Oh my gosh :( Poor Puck and Rachel! I feel bad for Puck since Rachel didn't tell him but I feel bad for Rachel because of Puck "breaking up" with her. Gah, I can't wait for another update!

[nicalyse]

I'm glad that you feel bad for both of them - that's kind of exactly what I was going for. ;)

[serenitysea]

AND NOW I AM DYING.

Augh.

[nicalyse]

Um...thank you?

♥

[smc_27]

I totally get why Puck was upset with her, but I get where she's coming from too. It's that classic Rachel Berry Syndrome, where she doesn't think she's being selfish, because she does have good reason for what she's done, but she still ends up hurting someone when the opposite is her intention.

I am glad he finally at least heard her out, even if it was just to say that he couldn't speak to her. I also liked that Rachel actually called Marlene. If I remember correctly, this was the first time Rachel had called her and not the other way around, even though the offer has always been there. And I love that Puck wasn't some big mystery to his mother. She knew why he was mad and wasn't afraid to tell Rachel.

Also, Facebook ruins everything. :P

[nicalyse]

I think that's the thing about the two of them so much of the time - they're both wrong and right all at once.

Puck's willingness to talk to her is a growth thing. I'm proud of him for it, even though I wrote it and my pride is therefore ridiculous.

Effing Facebook though.