Excellent part even if i want to smack Catherine, damned give us a break. The spanking was impressive and sexy, love this punishment so much and love the pretty naughty Greg rubbing against Warrick.
Aw, someone's gotta get hot under the collar over the whole thing, and you know what Catherine's like for mother hen-ing the boys ;). I doubt she'd be complaining if she was the one actually doing it though..! ^^
Glad you're enjoying the naughty Greg rubbing up to Warrick, I have a suspicion that this isn't the last you'll see of that habit! Mind you, it is a wonderful habit to get into *whistles innocently*
And I did get your gift, thank you very much! I never get notifications from LJ, so I hadn't seen it until you said ^^. I shall definitely be popping it up, I'm terrible when it comes to banners and such like :D
For which bit, or just generally? And yep, I understand it - that's part of the reason why I did an incredibly long build up (for me!) before getting into the more sexual aspects. Jumping straight into things would seem wrong, but there's elements throughout that just hint at things, personality types that can settle remarkably easily. Mind you, I also had the phrase "None of us is who we appear to be on the outside" quite firmly in my mind at the time of writing too, which helped... !
Ah, I suspect it's the eye of the beholder for a lot of it - I focused primarily on the driving forces behind Nick, the burning loyalty, trust and strength, and once the actual slash concept's been overcome then I found there to be only one little nudge over the hill before it strangely became natural. Mind you, there's a lot of hints in the canon that could be used, but then again I always look out for those more than most other people! - especially when there's a canon fetish club in there *still dancing with joy for that bit! Oh, the writers deserve chocolates* Weirdly enough, I found the hardest part for some people was actually the concept of Gil/Nick instead of either Warrick/Nick or Greg, but thankfully they get over that pretty quick too ^^
Ah well, as long as it all makes vague sense and consistency, we can have a bit of artistic license over it ;)
Thank you very much, it's most appreciated (especially for this type of story! You never know how many people you've managed to offend)! *smooches*
And you won't have to wait long for that conversation .. I hope, anyway, I'm in the middle of writing it, if it starts to stall I'm going to kick someone - heh heh!
...The budget doesn't cover that type of expenditure. *snort*
this chapter contained many delights, with nick's 'punishment' and aftermath, and with the behind-the-scenes dialogue between the three women. They're all so Dominant it's almost funny, their interactions. (I realize there was some talk earlier in the fic as to sara being one of gil's...? boys...? But for some reason I perceive her as D.) Getting a glimpse of warrick/greg didn't detract at all :D
I'm sure it'll all play out... The careful setting of the trap for blake and grissoms's calculated, sometimes blase handling was perfection.
Thanks! I'm not sure what Sara is, I have to confess - I suspect she's likely to be her own woman, so I suspect that I'd probably classify her as a D of her own. Perhaps a guest D? *ponder* Although it was fun to write them like that, it almost felt like a bondage version of Mystery Theatre... subtitles and ratings given for your viewing pleasures!
Oh yes, for the moment everything's going swimmingly with Blake. Mind you, I have a sneaking suspicion you know what happens in my fics... *evil grin*
Amazing chapter, Nick took his punishment pretty well, both he and Gil enjoying themselves? I don't think anyone realized what Blake was about to do to Nick, I am sure Girssom was beyond pissed, but had to play the part.
Leave it to Catherine to read between the lines, and know that there is more going on than just a case, and she wouldn't be Catherine if she did not blow a fuse.
Greg lost a little control there for a while, can't wait to see where that goes.
Have to agree with you and podga, who else is the but Gil/Nick
I hadn't realised how instrumental Catherine was going to be in the fic - with a group of blokes who are desperate to consider all evidence other than the stuff directly under their noses, it's so much easier to have someone blunt who can slap them around a bit ^^
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thanks a lot to share.
PS: have you received my gift ?
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Glad you're enjoying the naughty Greg rubbing up to Warrick, I have a suspicion that this isn't the last you'll see of that habit! Mind you, it is a wonderful habit to get into *whistles innocently*
And I did get your gift, thank you very much! I never get notifications from LJ, so I hadn't seen it until you said ^^. I shall definitely be popping it up, I'm terrible when it comes to banners and such like :D
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Ah well, as long as it all makes vague sense and consistency, we can have a bit of artistic license over it ;)
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You're writing is great and you capture the essence of them all, perfectly.
I really really want to hear this conversation between Nick and Gil.
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And you won't have to wait long for that conversation .. I hope, anyway, I'm in the middle of writing it, if it starts to stall I'm going to kick someone - heh heh!
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this chapter contained many delights, with nick's 'punishment' and aftermath, and with the behind-the-scenes dialogue between the three women. They're all so Dominant it's almost funny, their interactions. (I realize there was some talk earlier in the fic as to sara being one of gil's...? boys...? But for some reason I perceive her as D.) Getting a glimpse of warrick/greg didn't detract at all :D
I'm sure it'll all play out... The careful setting of the trap for blake and grissoms's calculated, sometimes blase handling was perfection.
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Oh yes, for the moment everything's going swimmingly with Blake. Mind you, I have a sneaking suspicion you know what happens in my fics... *evil grin*
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Amazing chapter, Nick took his punishment pretty well, both he and Gil enjoying themselves? I don't think anyone realized what Blake was about to do to Nick, I am sure Girssom was beyond pissed, but had to play the part.
Leave it to Catherine to read between the lines, and know that there is more going on than just a case, and she wouldn't be Catherine if she did not blow a fuse.
Greg lost a little control there for a while, can't wait to see where that goes.
Have to agree with you and podga, who else is the but Gil/Nick
again wonderful, beautifully wrote.
can't wait to hear Gil and Nick talk
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Very glad you enjoyed it!
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