Can you plese tell me if you think this is a good enough personal statement, im looking at you joe, and gary and iain, and charlotte. mainly. but any help would be great help.
Its good but there are just a few areas that need tidying up a little - [i put the bits that I would change in capitals so that they're easier to see
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As far as I'm aware, its just as much as you can get into the box. Unless you're doing it online in which case there might be a word count? Which would be a bitch. When we did it we used the paper applications and just wrote in Times New Roman [it has to be size ten and that's the smallest] and made the margins really tiny. If there is a word count then I guess just do the changing about of the art/not art stuff, and the commas and things. Good luck!
Sorry this took me so long, I've had a pretty bad day.
Charlotte has already said it best. But yeah, you should really brag about that exhibition, embellish on some points and talk about your course at Stamford. If you've got a word-count to follow maybe you should use a thesaurus. And keep re-writing it.
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If there is a word count then I guess just do the changing about of the art/not art stuff, and the commas and things.
Good luck!
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Charlotte has already said it best. But yeah, you should really brag about that exhibition, embellish on some points and talk about your course at Stamford.
If you've got a word-count to follow maybe you should use a thesaurus. And keep re-writing it.
Good though. It's fluent and structurally sound.
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