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[niffirgmada]

"It sure is dark"She said

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[erinisyourdaddy]

I love it. I'm glad you used to line about shaving your head and calling yourself a monk, and shaving your head and calling yourself a punk. The imagery is excellent and it makes me feel.. kind of sad. The important thing is that it makes me feel, and this is a very well written poem.