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nika_dixon

Sleep

Jul 03, 2010 17:56

As some of you may know, I've recently become quite addicted to the Chlollie pairing on Smallville. My plot bunnies have been attacking me to write some fanfic for it, and I had to give in. This is a little one-shot that won the initial plot-bunny fight. It just popped into my head and I had to share. It's my first official Smallville FanFic so ( Read more... )

smallville, fanfic, writing, chlollie

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fickery July 3 2010, 23:06:24 UTC

Sweet, well-written, and very believable. Loved this line: Crime never took a sick day, but it sure as hell liked to sleep in.

Hope your Chlollie plotbunnies don't leave you alone--would love to read more fics from you. :-)

nika_dixon July 3 2010, 23:38:15 UTC

:) Thanks! I have a dozen different stories bouncing around - for some reason they love the idea of poor Chloe getting caught without her phone. :) Or maybe I'm just in the mood to torment poor Ollie. ;)

sxymami0909 July 3 2010, 23:59:16 UTC

This is your first fic? It was AMAZING! Completely in character and I adore Bart! I love the way you wrote this. I can totally see this happening! Great job :-D

nika_dixon July 4 2010, 01:54:11 UTC

Thank you!!! I was a bit worried about the banter - I've read so many awesome stories in the community it's a bit daunting to try to follow such fantastic tales. ^_^

soapfan101 July 4 2010, 00:00:46 UTC

Great Job..hope you write more in the future....

nika_dixon July 4 2010, 01:54:59 UTC

If the plot bunnies have their way - I'll definitely be writing more!

ihearttvsnark July 4 2010, 00:02:30 UTC

I absolutely loved this story. You are a fantastic writer and you have the characters nailed. It was so sweet that he was by her side and worried...and I love how he played off calling her his girlfriend. So cute. I hope you write more Chlollie fic. Fantastic job.

nika_dixon July 4 2010, 01:55:53 UTC

I love how he always seemed to be avoiding the topic of what exactly they mean to each other --- well until the season finale that is! And thank you - I'm glad to hear I had the banter/characters done correctly!

gracemis July 4 2010, 02:28:33 UTC

Lovely One-shot. I like the snapshot in time with the Chloe focus. Bart's rescue was sweet too. It's always nice to have that sense that they all watch out for each other.

You did a good job keeping them all in character too.

cheers

nika_dixon July 4 2010, 03:29:12 UTC

PHEW! :) Thank you - I find it's hard the first couple of times to get the "voice" right - Chloe and Oliver have such great one-liners when they do the verbal sparring!