Cold Comfort

[nine_ten_11th]

Title: Cold Comfort
Author: nine_ten_11th
Pairing: Doctor/Master
Warnings: oral sex, anal sex, and "Star Wars" references.
Summary: My version of their reunion in "The End of Time: Part 1".

Comments

[lokiiago]

The drumming!!!

Also "last time he had done that"? JACK ;)

Mmmmmm so hot. I love how you really get into their characters and make it realistic...and hot...and did I mention hot?

[nine_ten_11th]

Oh, I think he'd remember if he'd done that with Jack. . . ;)

Thanks, I was trying to get into their heads. I'm glad it worked for you.

[silvermoon_06]

Oh! Wow! This was absolutely sensual and so very sexy! I do love your version of their reunion for EOT I so much more. :)

This was so deliciously evil, I love how the Master sneaked up on the Doctor, by the abandoned sandwich stand. When he grabbed him by his right hand, and pulled him along, I loved his remark about having had a spare one on the valiant. Simply wicked.

When the Doctor commented on the Master's living area, about living in that old pipe, I giggled like a loon. Oh, and the Master making Ten strip, that was just so very sexy. The banter between the two of them was so spot on. You got their characters perfectly. :) The way the Master took the Doctor, down on the ground, without any regard, was so dirty, but, oh so good.

I really enjoyed this very much. It was absolutely brilliant, I loved all of it. Thank you, it's gone right into my memories. :)

[nine_ten_11th]

I'm so flattered! I liked writing the stripping part, because it's so sexy and awkward at the same time. And I'm happy you liked the banter; I spent a while trying to get into their heads. Glad to know it was worth it. :)

[brokenangelred]

Pausing here to squee at your icon.

[silvermoon_06]

Oh, thank you! :) I love it myself. :) This one was made by an LJ user named lunadeath02.

[light_frost]

Ooh! *fans self* Very hot! Also--may I just say one thing on your format? It would be better if you put a space between each new paragraph. On the internet, it looks rather bunched together, and in fanfiction paragraphs are typically separated by spaces...

Other than that, your story was really great!

[nine_ten_11th]

Format changed! You're absolutely right; it's just that on my computer there were tabstops and so it looked better.

Thank you for the compliment; I was hoping people would enjoy.

[light_frost]

Much better! :D And you're welcome!

[werefox61]

I enjoyed your story very much. The dialog sounded very true to character. I can picture this in my smutty mind's eye(too bad it's a kids show). I actually had to read it because the warnings made me laugh...
"oral sex, anal sex, and "Star Wars" references"
Oh no, not the dreaded Star Wars references! Oh you awful person, you! :)

[nine_ten_11th]

Not Star Wars! Won't somebody please think of the children!

Seriously, thank you.

[evilawyer_fic]

“Why are you already miles off?”

From my way of looking at things, this sums up what the Doctor always is and always has been vis-a-vis the Master (evil the Master is, yes, but not unemotional or detached; he yearns for something more than nothing from the Doctor --- even if it's only the Doctor's hate --- and always has), and that's why there's no love or safety in the sex. It's wonderful you catch that here (although that's not your focus, I think). Nice work.

[nine_ten_11th]

You're absolutely right, and I did want to emphasize that. The Master was terrified of being forgiven by the Doctor not because it was a sign of love but because (at least from the Master's point of view) it was a dismissal of everything he'd done. The Doctor always has the problem of being detached, even from people he cares deeply about. The general idea in this story was that the Master could give the Doctor what he needed, but that it came with a price.