Bodyguards and Biggest Fans

[ninja_lurker]

Title: Bodyguards and Biggest Fans (Team Castle, Ch. 3)
Word count: 1,472
Characters/pairings: Kate Beckett/Rick Castle
Rating/Warnings: PG
Summary: It's a good thing Castle has a bodyguard of sorts, because his fans lack boundaries.
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: No infringement intended. I'm not making any money off of this. If I were, I'd be off on a

Comments

[jbperkins322]

From the your writing, I wouldn't have thought it was your first fanfic. Your characterization seem spot-on. Martha was always one of my favorite characters, and I like how you dealt with the way the others feel about her. Looking forward to more from you.

[ninja_lurker]

Thank you! I really wanted the characterization to be accurate. I'm hoping to feature Martha more heavily in an upcoming chapter.

[anthro06]

Loving this story so far! This was my favorite part of this chapter:

Beckett stares at him. Why does he keep doing that? "Castle-" she begins, but Martha's being wheeled out to them. As Dr. Slappy starts to medi-babble at Rick, Martha beckons her closer with her good hand. Beckett leans down.

"Saw that," Martha slurs.

Oh, crap.

Great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work!

[ninja_lurker]

Haha, thank you! I had fun writing that ending.

[musicgeekster]

Again, very well done. I love that you tie back to previous "chapters" very subtly. I love that I can actually imagine this like it's a scene from the show. Well done.

[ninja_lurker]

That's my goal, keep in the show's reality. :-) Glad you liked it.

[lovefromgirl]

That line of Martha's reminds me of what my gran was like after her stroke -- that is, just as much of a gossip as ever!

Beckett: 100000. Fangirls: ZIP.

[ninja_lurker]

Hahaha! They really didn't have a chance against Beckett.

Glad you found Martha true to life. I hope as I write her I'll be able to preserve her sense of humor and personality.