Auto Conspiracy And Reluctant

Apr 13, 2005 00:29

“Emotion cursed: Forever bleak ( Read more... )

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my_eccentricity April 14 2005, 03:23:36 UTC
It's a beautiful thing that the two of you both wrote something together. Interesting results...you should do it more often.

At times I can tell who wrote what, but other times it all blended smoothly together.

A few of the lines that jumped out at me are:

Sanity has leapt across the stars
My shooting star missed as yours collided

Each gasping breath is the final test
And your explanation consists of fillers

Now I sink below the shadow of a dream

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nithilius April 14 2005, 03:46:48 UTC
Thank you. maybe I'll write more poems with Vinnie and maybe even other people, I don't know.. it's fun.

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