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nkiseki

Fic: Clean Underwear

Jul 28, 2008 22:00

Title: Clean Underwear
Fandom: NEWS
Word Count: 1100+
Rating: G
Summary: Shige occasionally meets new people at the laundromat. In which Shige meets a laundry novice. [AU | ShigePi]
Notes: Can be read as friendship or more. I need to stop writing fic during my breaks at work.

( It's nearing eight in the evening on a Saturday night when Shige gets to the laundromat a few blocks from his apartment building to do his weekly wash. )

p: yamapi/shige, length: oneshot, *fanfic, f: johnny's entertainment

Comments 25

chrisrenheb July 29 2008, 05:16:19 UTC

This is so good, made me smile through it all.
Great job, I can just imagine that scenario.
Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed it.

nkiseki July 30 2008, 02:55:33 UTC

Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you liked it.

the_suit_case July 29 2008, 05:16:33 UTC

SHINNNNNNNY. Shinny. Shinny.

Shinny.

nkiseki July 30 2008, 02:55:53 UTC

Lunaaaaaa.

prince_ozora July 29 2008, 05:23:16 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWW that is too cute!! XD shinny is awesome

nkiseki July 30 2008, 02:57:06 UTC

Thank you!

yum_gums July 29 2008, 05:56:26 UTC

hahaha it's cute. making new friends at a laundromat. aahahaha
pi is really friendly, ne?

nkiseki July 30 2008, 02:58:27 UTC

I don't think he's really someone who would do that, but it's AU so can can make him as OOC as I wan ^^ Thanks for reading!

fairy_illusions July 29 2008, 07:01:28 UTC

Haha if I hadn't read your summary and stuff, I would have thought it was Koyama that was cramming in his laundry lol I remember reading countless jweb entries of him ruining his white clothes to I believe, pink and light blue and being proud of having colored clothing he's never purchased haha *goes off on tangent*

Will you be continuing this? You cannot possibly leave me here wondering what Shige and Yamapi will be doing while the laundry is still in the wash right? lol I'm so pushy XD It was a unique scenario. Good job :D

nkiseki July 30 2008, 03:10:57 UTC

I was contemplating Koyama doing that, but I didn't want to break the "long history" of KoyaShige BFF-ness that should exist in everything. I accidentally colored my towel before because I didn't realize that my friend's shirt bled as I usually hand-wash my clothes bleed >< So now I have a slightly gray towel that makes me sad every time I look at it.

Oh, I don't know... I intended for it to be a oneshot so probably not. And I can leave you wondering; just watch me do it. =P Hm, I could probably add another part to this though. ... Oh god, I really shouldn't. *is thinking about it maybe*

Thanks!

fairy_illusions July 30 2008, 06:49:52 UTC

Haha just think about Koyama and your gray towel won't look as sad haha :]

You better not leave me hanging or I'll...I'll....(I'll figure out something to do lol) You should add another part because ShigePi deserves more than just meeting in a laundromat! *pushes you towards computer* Now...errr....write before I completely steal Shige and Pi from the world (and you).

XD

nkiseki July 31 2008, 05:29:19 UTC

X3

But I leave it to your imagination of all the possibilities after meeting! XD I'll think about it. I have ideas that could take place in this verse and I'm kind of tempted to write them... But right now, I owe fic to someone and she's hounding me every day~ She'll kill me if I post another JE fic without doing her's first (she's such a princess XD). Don't steal them! They are my inspiration! Or I need them for fic at least!