Happy birthday, dear Nos

Mar 08, 2008 04:02

It's still your birthday if I haven't been to sleep, right? I could not resist the urge to send you good wishes and twirls as close to your actual birthday as possible. I hope your day was grand.

ETA: Your fic is done. Hope you enjoy it.

Title: Silver
Author: vsee
Pairing: F/K
Rating: Adult/explicit
Length: about 2800 words
Thank yous: Very ( Read more... )

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leafy22 March 8 2008, 21:49:34 UTC
There was a bar of moonlight on the bed. I'm sorry, but I couldn't resist pulling the blanket down to see what it looked like on your back. You're silver.

And a back rub - mmm! I love the way this connects to 'Turn Toward Home' - you've created a beautifully absorbing universe for the boys with these stories.
♥ ♥ ♥

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vsee March 12 2008, 17:58:57 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, leafy, and that you appreciated the connection to Turn Toward Home. That universe is a nice place to play, and there is a good chance I will go back to that at least one more time.

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nos4a2no9 March 8 2008, 22:23:29 UTC
vsee, I've been so delighted to see you return to writing over the last few months, and you couldn't have come up with a more perfect gift. It's so gratifying to see you stretch your creative muscles and do something that gives you so much pleasure and, of course, brings the rest of us joy. I loved this story! You put so much detail in your writing, and I can visualize each second of each scene with perfect clarity. The sex here is wonderful: hot, lushly sensual and nicely detailed, and you also manage to address some of the relationship issues (Fraser's insecurity, Ray's inexperience) and allow the Boys to work through their misgivings with a bit of good ol' fashioned sexin'. I also liked the notion that Fraser can let himself go, and that Ray likes it. They make such a good couple ( ... )

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:08:55 UTC
Nos, I am delighted that you enjoyed this. I had a great deal of fun writing it, and trying something new. I'm so pleased (and relieved) that both the sex and the emotional side came through. I'm so happy that I had a chance to participate in your birthday comm and to try to give back something for all the fun you've given me this year with your wonderful fic. I'm glad we've had a chance to become better acquainted. Here is to another wonderful year for you and for this fandom...cheers.

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akite March 9 2008, 00:14:37 UTC
Yes! So very vivid in every way. Such a wonderful story, I feel like it's my birthday.

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:10:23 UTC
Hey, akite, I am honored at the breaking out of the stick people icon! It feels like winning a medal! Whee! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have now overcome my I've never written sex barrier...hope I can just keep on rolling through to more fic.

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hurry_sundown March 9 2008, 02:27:47 UTC
Ray, silver in the moonlight ... lovely image, that.

The rest of this is kind of pretty, too. *g*

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:20:43 UTC
Thank you for the nice comment. I enjoyed playing around a little with the cliches of romance with this story, and the other story in this universe. It was a lot of fun. Thanks for reading.

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arrow00 March 9 2008, 03:12:17 UTC
Yay! It's lovely, oh, lovely. Selfish Fraser twists my kink-knob. Not to mention the between-Ray's-legs GUH.

Thank you so for sexin' the boys so sweetly.

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:21:44 UTC
Heh, arrow, nothing could please me more than to hear that this hit your buttons. Yay! Thanks for your help and encouragement.

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