Comments | nolimbs4u: Happy birthday, dear Nos

vsee in nolimbs4u

Happy birthday, dear Nos

Mar 08, 2008 04:02

It's still your birthday if I haven't been to sleep, right? I could not resist the urge to send you good wishes and twirls as close to your actual birthday as possible. I hope your day was grand.

ETA: Your fic is done. Hope you enjoy it.

Title: Silver
Author: vsee
Pairing: F/K
Rating: Adult/explicit
Length: about 2800 words
Thank yous: Very ( Read more... )

Comments 39

brigantine March 9 2008, 04:35:07 UTC

Ooo, pretty descriptions!

I like how relaxed Ray is, just letting Fraser do whatever, and how comfortable Fraser is now, knowing Ray will let him, will enjoy it. The whole scene is wonderfully languorous and warm. Mmmm... :)

vsee March 12 2008, 18:23:39 UTC

Yay, so glad you liked this, and appreciated the pacing. I'm glad I managed to get the mood I was trying to set in there. Thanks for the comments.

viciouscats March 9 2008, 07:41:28 UTC

I really liked this. Guh!

vsee March 12 2008, 18:27:23 UTC

yay, thanks so much for the comment! *grins stupidly*

luzula March 9 2008, 11:07:32 UTC

Mmmm, so hot. I like Fraser letting himself be selfish.

vsee March 12 2008, 18:30:10 UTC

It was a lot of fun to let Fraser loose. I'm giddy that you liked this. That was my first try at NC-17, and I have managed to get over the fear of trying that, mostly.

cysefin March 9 2008, 18:28:33 UTC

nom nom nom. This is very yummy

vsee March 12 2008, 18:30:41 UTC

So happy to have entertained you, yay! Thanks for the comment.

keerawa March 9 2008, 19:25:28 UTC

Mmmmm, that was lovely. I like the way that you placed it into the context of their relationship, and made this (very very hot) PWP a movement forwards in their relationship, where Fraser starts to give up some of his anxieties.

vsee March 12 2008, 18:34:45 UTC

keerwa, I am so flattered and happy that you enjoyed this. I was pleased with how this story slotted itself into the other story. For me, there isn't really much payoff in a straight PWP, so I felt much more comfortable finishing the writing of the sex once I realized why I was telling this story. It was nice of Ray to finally tell me as I was in mid-draft. Thanks so much for your comments.

keerawa March 13 2008, 00:29:14 UTC

It was nice of Ray to finally tell me as I was in mid-draft.
*laughs* I know exactly what you mean. Muses pull that kind of thing on me all the time.