Happy birthday, dear Nos

Mar 08, 2008 04:02

It's still your birthday if I haven't been to sleep, right? I could not resist the urge to send you good wishes and twirls as close to your actual birthday as possible. I hope your day was grand.

ETA: Your fic is done. Hope you enjoy it.

Title: Silver
Author: vsee
Pairing: F/K
Rating: Adult/explicit
Length: about 2800 words
Thank yous: Very ( Read more... )

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meresy March 9 2008, 19:34:10 UTC
Gnah. Vee, this is hot to death. You have a real gift for detail, and your fic is just . . . lush. Like good wine. You should be proud of yourself.

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:44:14 UTC
*clinks newbie writer rings with meresy to activate our awesome powers*

Thanks, mer, for the very kind comments. I'm glad that this worked for you, and that, well, it managed to be hot. First try at a sex scene, and I was a little intimidated.

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green_grrl March 9 2008, 19:44:05 UTC
Oh my god, this is incendiary! I LOVE sleepy!sex, and these two unable to resist each other in the moonlight is freaking gorgeous.

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:46:39 UTC
Yay, thanks for the very nice comments. Sleepy sex seems like a natural for these guys. Glad the moonlight worked...it started as a bit of a joke, since in both of these stories I was playing a little with romantic cliches. But I liked it once I started playing with it, and I've always been of the opinion that romance and heat are not mutually exclusive.

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c_regalis March 9 2008, 23:19:07 UTC
This is so SO beautiful. Ray, almost asleep, but the sense memory sending signals... beautiful. And silver, yes. Beautiful.

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:49:34 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for the great comments, c. All your picspams over the years have been fuel for me, and so inspiring. I am so glad I could entertain you in return, and that you liked this.

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spuffyduds March 10 2008, 00:07:40 UTC
GOOD GOD. *flail* BUNK.

That was so completely gorgeous, and just sweet and languid and wow, and I so loved "made him feel both powerless and protected," because, OOOH, yes.

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:50:50 UTC
snort! That's a compliment, darling. My work here is done.

(But yes, I am all secretly pleased with myself for getting an emotional punch in there, too, I am sneaky that way.)

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mlyn March 10 2008, 06:50:00 UTC
This, ahem, hits a lot of my buttons. In other words, Woo! Happy birthday to Nos!

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vsee March 12 2008, 18:52:30 UTC
Ahem, there is hardly a polite way to say to someone I don't know well that I am glad this hit your buttons, so...uh, screw politeness? No, wait, that isn't it either. *g* Seriously, very glad this worked for you. Thanks very much for the comment.

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