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Gone Native (John/Ronon)

Jan 17, 2010 12:37

Title: Gone Native
Author: bluflamingo
Pairing: John/Ronon
Word count: 2054
Rating: PG
Spoilers: The Return AU

Summary: The replicators never came for Atlantis. Instead, it's been a year, and John's got to decide what he's willing to give up. What he wants to get.

( Gone Native )

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Comments 53

esteefee January 18 2010, 05:05:40 UTC

\o/ OMG OMG! This is my dream, really. John giving up everything to find home, to find Ronon again. ::melts into absolute puddle::

I loved all the touches: Rodney threatening to drag him to Carson, but knowing in his heart of hearts that John is serious; John's two lone duffle bags because what else does he need except what he's come for?; Teyla in her rightful role; that Ronon is with Larrin in trying to find an effective fighting force. Just all brilliant, but the way just for a moment Ronon doesn't recognize him in his Pegasus clothing but he pulls him in, and they kiss and kiss and kiss like they had as much time as they could ever want and then some

EEEE!

bluflamingo January 18 2010, 20:42:05 UTC

Thank you!

Teyla in her rightful role

I so, so want this for Teyla (you know, if there was ever going to be any more show to want it in). She's a *leader* what happened to that?!

telesilla January 18 2010, 09:20:56 UTC

Eeeee! I love this so very much! It's so very John, all determined and slightly crazy. :)

bluflamingo January 18 2010, 20:42:46 UTC

Thank you!

all determined and slightly crazy

It's only crazy if you *don't* expect it to go horribly awry at some point...

almostnever January 18 2010, 09:43:43 UTC

Great story. This sounds just like something John would do, and just like how he'd do it. :-) I love their reunion.

bluflamingo January 18 2010, 20:43:21 UTC

Thank you!

This sounds just like something John would do, and just like how he'd do it

Yeah-don't think about it, just go and hope for the best.

ariadne83 January 18 2010, 23:39:58 UTC

Oh this is just beautiful. I could so see it going this way.

bluflamingo January 19 2010, 15:30:11 UTC

Thank you!

skieswideopen January 20 2010, 04:58:51 UTC

I really like this. I especially love John's careful weighing of what he's getting and what he's giving up--courageous, but not reckless, exactly.

bluflamingo January 20 2010, 19:53:23 UTC

Thank you!

I especially love John's careful weighing of what he's getting and what he's giving up--courageous, but not reckless, exactly.

Yeah - it's still probably not the wisest decision ever, but it was at least well thought out first :)