[One Piece] Old Souls

[nosilencehere]

TITLE: Old Souls
FANDOM: One Piece
RATING: PG-13
PAIRINGS: Smoker/Ace is the only solid one. You can pair the Strawhats up any way you want, but personally I tend to be of the belief that they're all sleeping together. Yes, all of them. Shut up, it's cute.

Comments

[irrelevant]

You don't know how happy I am you're still writing Smoker/Ace. I now have a huge grin on my face. This made my very early morning.

I loved the implications of past lives, the eternal circle, and the whole "us, always" thing Ace alluded to. Luffy does have an incredibly old soul. It's one of the things that makes him, well, Luffy... and no one else.

You're right, by the bye. The Straw Hats are all sleeping together. And it is so cute.^^

[megalotro]

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Honey you have no idea how happy this makes me *squishies and smothers a bit*

Very interesting and moving :) Pretty piece of writing, my sweet.

-Tro

PS - So, what you're trying to say is when I was sleepin with you in Toronto... you thought I looked like a corpse?

[snarkymonkey]

Nice work! ^___^ Haven't read a OP fic in forever it seems. *wriggles* I yubs it, hon. =3

[devlinnreiko]

This was.....asdfghjkl; Such a good thing to wake up to.

So good! I love your writing. Everything from the words, to the voice, to the descriptions. And plus its SmoAce which is win!

Awesome job. Now to read it again. ^_________^

[erinlin]

Ace buries his face in Smoker's neck, trying to regain himself, but every time he breathes it's fire and smoke. There is no sky, no ground, no water-there is only the maelstrom of flame and smoke, curling and flickering around them, alive but bound to their will.

"Always us," Ace murmurs, feeling delirious with the power and glory of it all, not entirely sure of what he's saying. "Always this."

Smoker just kisses him fiercely, smoke-wreathed fingers tangling in fire-flicker hair, and they spiral into each other, grey and red and white and gold.

It's a long, long time before they come back to themselves, and to earth.

That part is just... gawh! So. Freaking. Cool.