Fic - NC-17 - Glee - Puck/Rachel - Underneath (part four)

[not_poignant]

Title: Underneath (part 4)
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Genre: Aaaaaaaangst, Smut
Spoilers: throughout early season 1, pre Mattress, since this was written before it had happened. So, AU? I’m just lazy about putting fiction up, sorry!
Warnings: Smexin', and, aaaaaaangst.
Word Count: 3293

Author's Note / Summary: Feedback makes

Comments

[musical_jay]

This was so painful. ;_;

Puck and Rachel are both so similar in so many ways, so they would naturally be drawn to each other, but at the same time, they can't help hurting each other. (I'm including Rachel in this, because I feel like in some ways she's still using Puck as a replacement for Finn.) But at the same time, you see these brief glimpses of the two of them, completely unguarded, and I think that drives them towards being angsty and nasty to each other because it's so confusing to them.

Sigh, you write this pair so well.

[not_poignant]

It has a happier ending! Which is now up, huzzah. :)

Puck and Rachel... they are very interesting characters when you place them alone in the same room together. I hope the second half of season 1 Glee lets us see this again.

[knkykty]

Damn it, why are all my fav authors writing angst?? This was gorgeous, and poor Rachel...I always expect angst from you, but I can't wait for the happy ending. More please!!

[not_poignant]

It has a happy ending, which is now up, huzzah! Now time to write some prompts from the glee kink meme I think, because that meme is just dangerous and awesome and not enough prompts are being filled, lol.

[mvp]

i just read all 4 chapters in one sitting. I love this im not big on all angst all the time but i love this!! I do hope there is happy ending somewhere thoug.

[not_poignant]

Woot! The fifth part is up, and there is remarkably less angst, so hopefully that helps. :D

[not_poignant]

Angst is awesome! :D

[ophelia1234]

Man, how did I miss the last couple of chapters of this??

LOVE what you are doing with this story. It is SO hard to read sometimes and so hard to stop at other times. You aren't shying away from the ugliness of both these personalities. SO, so well done!

[not_poignant]

Man, how did I miss the last couple of chapters of this??

They were hiding in my epic lack of 'updating regularly.'

Fifth part is up now; read, enjoy (hopefully)!