validation pt 7

[notochrasy]

Title: Validation
Chapter: 7/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: primarily Kris/Luhan, this chapter honestly doesn't play into any pairings
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth

Comments

[moryangi]

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME???

Wonderful chapter deary; thanks for clearing up some things, (even though *cough* you still left your evil fucking *cough* teasers *Cough*).

I can't wait for the next chapter. I really want to see more of the sekai relationship. The development of their story is quickly becoming my favorite part of the story.

Oh yea, and any cute brosky moments with Kris and Yixing is always a huge plus. Kray Fever forever.

[notochrasy]

I DON'T KNOW ;A;

thank you <3 yeah I kinda forced a lot of info into this chapter (hence why it's a bit longer than the other chapters lol) - but yes....my teasers 8D do it exo debut style~ hahaha.

sekai will probably be explored a bit more to a certain extent, but they play a relatively minor role in the entire arc of this fic, so let's see how it goes :)

I love Kray, they are so cute ;A;
Thank you for reading and commenting <3

[cairistiona]

Joonmyun! My bb. <3

Sehun you are a JERK.

[notochrasy]

haha finally the remaining members get added slowly (:

yeah, he pretty much is lol

[celleyou]

:'''DD I'm so glad that this was updated. I hope Luhan and Kai will be okay x_X I have so many more questions now about what's about to happen... I'M SO CURIOUS YEAH~

[notochrasy]

I'm sure they'll be fine, eventually lol :) Yeah...there will be a lot of events to come lol many interesting things will start to unfold haha.

thanks for reading and commenting !

[jyusou]

[notochrasy]

I kinda wanted to switch it up a little since all the other characters I've introduced through vignettes of their past basically, since they're all established...patients/cases within the facility already lol

[moonshine19]

frigging love this chapter even though i already miss Luhan! lol xD
it was a relief that you didn't make Sehun personality as a lovey dovey dreamy kid like in some fics. I liked his childish revenge! sekai is a love-hate relationship, I don't even ship them but it's interesting here.
above all, Kris' fist omg, this felt amazing as if I was the one who punched sehun! xDD

your scientific narration was wonderful as always, I found the mashmallow thing cute tho. ;D

[notochrasy]

good thing about having a consistent switch between 2 character focuses is that you know that Luhan will be back soon :P

ohh is it common to make Sehun a lovely dovey dreamy kid? I don't really read enough fic to know how he is portrayed lol XD

lol really?! well....it's good that you enjoyed the punch then hahahaha

I'm happy you liked the scientific narration, and honestly with the marshmallows...Kris' response after to why he chose marshmallows was mine...I honestly couldn't think of anything else to use as an example haha

thanks for reading and communing <3