validation pt 8

[notochrasy]

Title: Validation
Chapter: 8/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: primarily Kris/Luhan (not so much in this chapter though)
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth

Comments

[zhuxixi13]

OH MY FUCKING GOD. im a little confused cuz im still in middle schoo science but its alright lol. ummm so does this make luhan an invalid? i think it does. im not sure. all this sciencey stuff is floating in my head haha
wait, does luhan know that he's and invalid?

[notochrasy]

science aside, whether Luhan is an invalid or not is still contested territory :) there's a grey area between being invalid and being eligible for validation (and actually being validated) - like how Yixing should be eligible since he was genetically engineered, but because of certain...things (like he was supposed to be die as an embryo lol), he was never validated. Luhan's story will become a lot clearer, but yeah I think it's pretty safe to say that Luhan does exhibit some...Invalid traits ;)

and no, I don't think Luhan knows :P

thanks for reading and commenting!!

[jyusou]

[notochrasy]

HAhahahaha yeah there's a lot to take in for this chapter

[ookamino]

Ha! I knew it! *fist pump*

So I wonder who knocked over Yixing's mug still. Maybe it was Joonmyun :O (or Luhan's telepathy surfacing?)

[notochrasy]

Telekinesis, not telepathy (lol just had to clear that up)
Yeah at this point it is getting somewhat more obvious as to who knocked over Yixing's mug. The way that Luhan's scorpion tail reacted to Yixing's "healing" touch may have sparked something ;)

thank you for reading and commenting <3

[ookamino]

Oh god *facedesk*

I can't believe I made that mistake, I was so annoyed when people were confusing them after the MAMA teasers came out.
>>

[notochrasy]

haha that's fine, it's not hard to switch the words up and especially since telekinesis is such an awkward word to type out and telepathy just seems a lot easier to type XDDD

[yukichi_1004]

D: Mah comment was marked as spam.
Too many key mashes maybe.
But, in summarized version.
A) Holy shit.
B) Amazing chapter
C)Mindblown
D)Sad for Kris
E)Loved the scorpion tail contraption thing and its explanation and its function
F)Tao<3
G)FREAKING LU HAN.
H)Really nice song, I like it.

[notochrasy]

don't worry, I still have your comment!
I will reply to that comment too lol (if you remember what you wrote :P)

HAHA THE KRISHAN GIF. FATE. yes maybe ;)
and yeah lol Tao was just testing him to see if he knew his own name XD

your massive explosive comment was cute ;w; I was so taken aback by the comment and didn't realise it was marked as spam at first then I went to this page and was like "oh where'd it go?" XD

KRIS' STORY/HISTORY IS SO SAD. I want to hug him. And then punch him so I feel less emotional LOL.
And Luhan hahaha, this is like one of the major arcs of the story and it's only obvious now so many chapters in :) I'm kinda hoping that it isn't too much of a surprise, I wanted to hint it a lot earlier but didn't really know how haha, but it also should make it a bit clearer as to how Luhan has the upperhand when dealing with brain emulation with Kai.

Tao finally makes his appearance :D with a broom :D XD

And thank you, I'm happy you like the song :3
and thank you for reading and commenting as always <3

[moryangi]

So much awesome in this chapter...

[notochrasy]

Awww you're too kind ;w;