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notoriousjk

Detroit Waves (Chapter 3)

Aug 28, 2011 13:40

Title:Detroit Waves* (Chapter 3/14 ( Read more... )

david villa, fernando torres, steven gerrard, sergio ramos, detroit waves, xabi alonso, fic

Comments 23

hahahahagas August 28 2011, 20:27:08 UTC

This might sound completely ridiculously over dramatic but your posting this was like a ray of sunshine into my piss poor day:-)(8-2 god I'm so depressed, even Real playing brilliant couldnt cheer me up ( ... )

notoriousjk August 29 2011, 02:46:02 UTC

I really can't even talk about that comedy of errors right now

I'm glad you are liking the not so obvious route I'm taking w/Sergio & Fernando :-)

feel free to add me, no problem at all.

vitaminbjorner August 28 2011, 20:27:13 UTC

I just don't have words for this chapter! It was really good, and very insightful. I felt like we really got to have a closer look at the characters. Stevie really needs to man up and tell Nando, if he doesn't shit will explode y stuff will happen. But even though I'm always root for Sernando, I must say i feel a bit sad for Stevie y Nando. right now it just seems like a doomed relationship where neither wants to let go.
I'm really interested in what Nando will do when he finds out. I don't think (and hope) that he will leave detroit, but i think he might like, idk... fool himself into thinking that he has to, for stevie's sake? idk... i'm rambling about... sorry 'bout that.

notoriousjk September 13 2011, 00:13:02 UTC

ha! you have some really interesting theories about what is to come, that is all I'll say on that. spoilers!

thank you, I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :-)

narusaku4vr August 28 2011, 21:32:21 UTC

New chapter.

I'm loving the start of Nando and Sergio's friendship, Sergio being a complete dork when his with Nando and Nando having some adult feelings for him...it's adorable.

Stevie though, he should be honest with Nando. I'm sure Nando would prefer to hear it from him than from others.

Will be waiting for the next chapter.

notoriousjk September 13 2011, 00:13:54 UTC

Yup, Fernando sure would like to hear from Stevie, and not from anyone else.

Next chapter is up, hope you enjoy!

bremoisaho August 28 2011, 23:28:08 UTC

Lovely chapter, I really like how this is developing so far.

Please tell me you're taking them to a hockey game in the future? You can't have Detroit with out hockey.

notoriousjk September 13 2011, 00:14:44 UTC

ha! Don't worry, I cannot write a fic set in Detroit w/o mentioning that, or Buddy's Pizza or Red Pop! Hey hey Hockeytown!

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notoriousjk September 13 2011, 00:16:14 UTC

well, that's the thing about this fic, no one is perfect, and everyone is human. :-)

You aren't lying about the emotion & there's more where that came from.

you are quite welcome & I hope you enjoy chapter 4.