Detroit Waves (chapter 4)

Sep 12, 2011 16:48

Title:Detroit Waves* (Chapter 4/14 ( Read more... )

fernando torres, steven gerrard, sergio ramos, detroit waves, xabi alonso, fic

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narusaku4vr September 13 2011, 00:36:41 UTC
The plot thickens!

Stevie, tell Nando now because the more you delay this the harder it will get.

Xabi, has ulterior motives but he's bothered by it.

Nando is starting to fall for Sergio. :)

Looking forward for more.

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notoriousjk September 24 2011, 19:23:31 UTC
thank you! & more you shall have, just posted the next chapter, drama ahoy!

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bumpbear September 13 2011, 00:48:23 UTC
Poor Fernando :( and Stevie needs to tell him because this will just get worse for them the longer he doesn't. And oohh what is going to happen to Xabi

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notoriousjk September 24 2011, 19:24:03 UTC
well now you can find out! just posted the 5th chapter.

thank you for commenting!!

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dld_ftw September 13 2011, 02:14:39 UTC
Ah thank you, just what I needed after today's aggravation. Oh what a tangled web these boys are in!

It's going to be a huge, huge mess if Stevie waits much longer. Well, it's already going to be a huge, huge mess no matter what.

Oh Xabi, what are you going to get into?

I love that Sergio and Nando are slowly falling for each other. I love this whole story and can't wait for more!

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notoriousjk September 24 2011, 19:25:19 UTC
thank you thank you thank you!!

you aren't lying about the mess. & Xabi can't really help what he's getting into.

5th chapter just updated :-)

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dolittledo September 13 2011, 03:21:54 UTC
omgomgomgomg!
im so curious about Xabi >,<
i feel sorry for him but i do really want Steven to love him..
this story,,its just,,i love it like a lot <3

seriously cannot wait for the next chapter :D

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notoriousjk September 24 2011, 19:26:02 UTC
thank you so much!!! I'm so happy you are enjoying it so!

& now you don't have to wait, the 5th chapter is up.

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notoriousjk September 24 2011, 19:27:54 UTC
you are so welcome & thank you for the lovely comment.

Ah, don't be too harsh on Xabi, he's human, as are they all.

Stevie, so far, has been my favorite to write in this fic.

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