First thing I need to say: I dislike Xabi! I don't like his actitude! I can understand that he's attracted by Stevie but he must stay away from Fer/Stevie relationship!
And Stevie needs to talk to Fer as soon as possible if he wants that relationship keep going. I understand his doubts but procrastination only can lead to more troubles. I really like Stevie/Fer in this fic and I'm sad this will not end well and someone will be heartbroken!
I like Sernando interaction a lot! They seem so comfortable together. I doesn't expect it to be as easy after the way his first met went!! But of course they are made for each other, we all know. I'm sad about Fer being bullying at school, people really sucks sometimes! :(
Don't be too harsh on Xabi, he can't really help himself & he's trying his best to stay out of the way, but he's only human & thus flawed, like us all.
Yes, Stevie does & you know I really grew to love Stevie/Fernando in this too, which completely took me by surprise.
You'll gradually find out more about Fernando & his high school experience & no high school was not kind to him.
next chapter is up now! & thank you for the lovely comment.
Great update! I'm so curious to know how Fernando will finally find out about Steven's plans and whether this means their end or they can work it out. The Sergio/Nando relationship is really sweet, but Nando should have taken this chance to open up to someone about the bullying.
Oh, how I hate Joey (Barton), and not only in this story!
hey there - sorry i've been awol, life has been killing me. but i just tore through the last chapter and this one, and i must tell you: i am liking this story of yours, liking it a lot. can't wait to see how stevie/fernando fall apart and how our nyc boys pick them up and put them back together.
hope you are well, and that you enjoyed the trip home to detroit!
This just keeps getting more and more interesting. The Sergio/Fernando dynamic is fun to watch developing. They seem to have a comfort around eachtother thats natural and nice.
Stevie and Xabi seem to be regressing a bit though, sure Jamie's words didn't help as they are all that Stevie seems to be able to think about around him. As a result he's more guarded and less relaxed, something thats bound to affect how they interact. Still, the fact Stevie is so obsessed with Xabi's intentions is interesting and added to his inability to talk honestly with his own partner and his desire to leave even if that means leaving Fernando I don't think this story is even nearly over.
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& I just updated again.
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And Stevie needs to talk to Fer as soon as possible if he wants that relationship keep going. I understand his doubts but procrastination only can lead to more troubles. I really like Stevie/Fer in this fic and I'm sad this will not end well and someone will be heartbroken!
I like Sernando interaction a lot! They seem so comfortable together. I doesn't expect it to be as easy after the way his first met went!! But of course they are made for each other, we all know. I'm sad about Fer being bullying at school, people really sucks sometimes! :(
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Yes, Stevie does & you know I really grew to love Stevie/Fernando in this too, which completely took me by surprise.
You'll gradually find out more about Fernando & his high school experience & no high school was not kind to him.
next chapter is up now! & thank you for the lovely comment.
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I'm so curious to know how Fernando will finally find out about Steven's plans and whether this means their end or they can work it out.
The Sergio/Nando relationship is really sweet, but Nando should have taken this chance to open up to someone about the bullying.
Oh, how I hate Joey (Barton), and not only in this story!
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& yes Nando's inability to open up is one of his flaws & one of his scars.
Glad you noted the Joey Barton reference, I despise then man.
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hope you are well, and that you enjoyed the trip home to detroit!
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you'll find out very very soon how stevie & fernando fall apart.
& no worries, real life is certainly more important than this silly fan fic of mine :-)
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Stevie and Xabi seem to be regressing a bit though, sure Jamie's words didn't help as they are all that Stevie seems to be able to think about around him. As a result he's more guarded and less relaxed, something thats bound to affect how they interact. Still, the fact Stevie is so obsessed with Xabi's intentions is interesting and added to his inability to talk honestly with his own partner and his desire to leave even if that means leaving Fernando I don't think this story is even nearly over.
Great update!
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& no the story is not nearly over.
thank you for such a lovely comment!
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