Detroit Waves (chapter 4)

[notoriousjk]

Title:Detroit Waves* (Chapter 4/14

Comments

[vitaminbjorner]

Oh, i can can relate to Fernando so much in this chapter. :/ Being bullied can really destroy you. My heart goes out to him. Sergio is lovely. he makes me smile. I like how you have written the two of them, both separate, and together.
Hmm... Stevie needs to man up soon... and Xabi xabi xabi...

[notoriousjk]

ha ha poor Xabi, everyone wants to hate him, but to me, he's just human & therefore full of flaws (as are Stevie & Fernando & Sergio)

thank you for commenting :-)

[viscabarca101]

Really enjoy reading this ! I love your descriptions and characterization so much. Poor nando :( can't wait for the next chapter

[notoriousjk]

thank you!!!!!

& you don't have to wait any longer, next chapter is up!