A Shoulder To Cry On

[notsoshortcutie]

This is the short story that I had to write for English... It made my mom cry and I did let a few tears out too... It's really long... But I want to know what everyone thinks of it... The main idea is about Kait's mom... I added some to it because my teacher didn't want it to be completely true... That's also why I changed the names... Comment

Comments

wow

[dream_4_2morrow]

omg, that was amazing, i was balling my eyes out, thats serisoulsy one of the best pieces of writing ive EVER read in my entire life, omg, idk what i would have done if my mom passed away, omg... ahhh im still crying!!! that was soo good. if this is for english, you BETTER get the best grade on it, or ill kick the teachers ass. lol. j/p. ttyl.
*~amanda~*

[grvymanda89]

amanda that story is honestly amazin..did i tell u i saw kait at work? lol yeah shes cool lol
aww i flippion love u both <3
u should b a writer
<3 amanda

[xxnikkibabii5xx]

omg amanda..u knwo me ...why the hell would u make me read that lol ....i am crying histerically right now....omg.... its good though

xoxo
Nikki

[randyortonbaby2]

amanda...that was so good...i cant even explain it..i was actually crying...its so hard to believe that you only have a limited time with people..so cherish it all you can...i love you amanda <3 Love always and forever, Victoria

omg :(

[tabbi_07]

...that was the saddest thing i ever read but it was soo well written....it made me cry soo badd espically since it was a true story...idk wat i would do with out my mom and it is really true that you should treasure the time you have with the people you keep closest to your heart because you never know if they are gonna be there when u wake up or maybe if you are gonna be there....<3 you amanda

love you, x's and o's
tabbi