APPLICATION: Valkyrie Profile - Arngrim

[npc_mod]

This application has been ACCEPTED.

Comments

[pompous_today]

I haven't read the full app yet, but I should probably note that the player indicated in their e-mail that they're ESL.

[kisameisafish]

Yeah, France. This is pretty damn good though - just the odd misuse of a word that I expect from ESL who don't regularly converse/work as translators.

I dont know VP except what I have picked up from Ami so I guess we need her comments on the history and all but it seems fairly logical. I rather like the dream even if it's TLDR.

[blue_shields]

I'd like Ami's opinion for canon verification first, but I am leaning toward a yes. I got a clear picture of Arngrim's personality and the background was pretty easy to follow along with, as well. I did spot a few mistakes, but like Mob said, it's not jarring (mostly pluralizing words that don't need to be). I think they'll do fine here, especially since it's only for the last few months.

[stonyfaced]

Yeah, this app looks overall solid. A few mistakes, but pretty damn good for someone who's ESL. With verification, I'd say yes.

[felinemystique]

Agreed--I'd also like canon verification, but the app is consistent enough, so I'm leaning towards yes as well.

[flenceburgsbest]

Arngrim. Badass.

The background touches upon game one and describes his actions in game 2, and his personality fits him to a T. His sparse journal entry describes him too... he's such a grump.

Canon's verified, and I think the app checks out, too. The dream is delightfully confusing and leaves a lot of questions.

Canon verified. ...And Si.