we're friends forever~

[nt_carmy]

Good friends never stay forever, because if they never leave. You'll never know how great they are!

Comments

[silvanat]

Hey..
your entry is really good and very relatable =] btw thanks for the comment on my LJ

[dragonflye89]

*hug* that reminds of the texiles mantra of saying thank you and avoiding pain by simply saying 'your my inspiration'

so carmy, your my inspiration 日本語

[nt_carmy]

AHAHAH! I remember that! :P
heheh...how am i ur inspiration? ha?...lost
please explain ^^'

[dragonflye89]

carmy = fantastic sewer, funny person, cartoon character, freindly, so must make cute punk pleated checked shirt, anime, jpop, bankwest flower, bunnies, jap people, random smiley faces in book pages, hugs, rice, thursday @ Manning, library, books, drawing, umm forks (like ur display pic ehehe) etc etc etc

[miss_caitlinxxx]

aw. :( that's sad but so true.
saying goodbye is so hard but it always makes you realise how good things were.
memories are the best.
x

[michaelgriffith]

Hi Carmen- Great to see you trying to compose poems... this is an excellent start (although you may have been writing poems before this)... but I want you to read your poems aloud and try and hear how they sound and whether a re-arrangement of the words, even and exchange of some words... helps to make the poem "sing" more... Let me try to show what I mean by reshaping your first stanza:

It has happened
It is never forgotten.
Once gone it cannot be replaced.
Time cannot be displaced.
For the clock continues
to tick
no matter
what.

What do you think????

[nt_carmy]

thank you sir for helping me improve my literature skills :)
Yes, I think I should read my poems out loud before I publish them....thank you for your help and ideas I shall take them on board!