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AI RPS: Chimera 6b/?

Jan 18, 2010 15:46

Title: Chimera ( Read more... )

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nymphaea1 January 18 2010, 22:24:19 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad Baraz's POV on this came across. He's mostly a guy who's trying to do his job. He's also a Sidhe who doesn't think much of torturing scads of humans if that gets him where he thinks he needs to go, so there's that. But I think by his own standards he's being pretty restrained here.

ckalicka January 18 2010, 21:46:50 UTC

Your brain? I want to live in it. This is genius, pure genius. And protective Adam is so UNF.
Oh my God, I LOVE the connection between them, it feels so natural and beautiful. So excited for whatever you have in store for us next.

nymphaea1 January 18 2010, 22:28:11 UTC

My brain is kind of scary and random place. I can't say I'd wish it on anyone else.

I am so happy to hear the development of the relationship is working for you! It's the central point of the story, after all, so I didn't want it to be lost in all of the world building.

ckalicka January 18 2010, 22:41:35 UTC

It's the central point of the story, after all, so I didn't want it to be lost in all of the world building.

And this is why I love this story so much. While this whole world you created is so intricate and wonderfully detailed, Kradam and their bond still remain the focal point of it.

xbeyondinsanex January 18 2010, 22:03:14 UTC

*sighs happily* This was fantastic and well worth the wait. I can't wait to see whatother dangers are lurking around the corner.

nymphaea1 January 18 2010, 22:30:22 UTC

Thank you! I really do hope not to have such long pauses in the future.

wikken January 18 2010, 23:16:19 UTC

nymphaea1 January 19 2010, 01:41:29 UTC

Thank you! I will try to keep the updates more regular, at least now in the earlier part of the semester when I'm not so busy.

cultureslut1 January 18 2010, 23:35:35 UTC

Two posts so close together TYSM!

Methinks that Adam's protectiveness towards Kris is a little more than just the bond :)

Can't wait to see where the story takes them next!

Baraz's character still has me intrigued, you've certainly made him mysterious, I love this.

nymphaea1 January 19 2010, 01:43:17 UTC

Methinks that Adam's protectiveness towards Kris is a little more than just the bond :)

You think? ;)

Man, I am glad people are interested in Baraz. I kind of love him from a writing standpoint.

Thank you, as always, for being such a loyal and generous reader. It really does help to prime my interest in this project.