Finding Purpose (16/?)

Feb 02, 2007 17:00


Title: Finding Purpose (16/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: R
Spoilers: Up to 213 (Epiphanies)
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Angst/Romance
Summary: When your whole life gets flipped upside down, you need to find a reason to go on.
Word Count: 3,752
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kara/lee, bsg, finding purpose, bsg fic, fan fic

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jatnj February 3 2007, 00:54:20 UTC
Great chapter. You captured Kara's emotions wonderfully.

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nytel February 3 2007, 18:03:21 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you think so. :D

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ez_as_pi February 3 2007, 02:27:21 UTC
Lovely, lovely chapter. Her taking the picture down was a great detail. And the ring of course. Can't wait for the next chapter...

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nytel February 3 2007, 18:04:10 UTC
Thanks. :) I'm glad that I had a chance to work those two things into the chapter. :)

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mlsky February 3 2007, 04:01:42 UTC
Ah...excellent chapter. I love how this is all coming together. Kara's reactions felt very real and Lee and Zak's conversation was great.

Really enjoying this one.

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nytel February 3 2007, 18:04:49 UTC
*g* Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. :)

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latteaddict February 3 2007, 04:44:16 UTC
huzzah! I knew it was Racetrack *does a happy dance*

I'm now wondering if Maggie was rejected by Cylon Zak and so she is resentful. But I guess if she finds out Zak was switched and he never stopped loving her then she is possibly in for a happy future.

Kara in the shower. Poor girl doesn't know which way is up. I was so thrilled she remembered Lee's I love you but disheartened when she brushed it aside and again later when Lee decided he would take his cues from her :( *tries to squish pilots together*

The ring and picture removal spoke volumes and was a great way for Kara to make distinct moves away from Cylon Zak. I wonder if she will ever be able to be friends with real Zak?

The two brothers talking was nice. It was important for them to do that. I love how Zak could still be perceptive about Lee's feelings despite all he's been through with the Cylons.

Excellent chapter. I'm loving this story!!!

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nytel February 3 2007, 18:10:26 UTC
Yay for Racetrack! *g*

I'm now wondering if Maggie was rejected by Cylon Zak and so she is resentful. But I guess if she finds out Zak was switched and he never stopped loving her then she is possibly in for a happy future
--Lol. That's pretty much it. :) Of course seeing Zak happy with her will only mean more angst for Kara though. I'm so mean. Lol.

Kara in the shower. Poor girl doesn't know which way is up. I was so thrilled she remembered Lee's I love you but disheartened when she brushed it aside and again later when Lee decided he would take his cues from her :( *tries to squish pilots together*
--She really doesn't know which way is up. *huggles Kara* I was actually planning on her not remembering it at all, but due to i_am_girlfriday's influence it came out this way instead. :)

The ring and picture removal spoke volumes and was a great way for Kara to make distinct moves away from Cylon Zak.
--Thanks. I didn't even realize until I was writing this exactly how much of that part of her life she still has around her.

I wonder if she will ( ... )

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suffolkgirl February 3 2007, 10:06:12 UTC
Yes, Kara! Lee really did say it! :)

I liked how you brought in the ring and the photo, and I liked how Zak knows Lee so well he immediately picks up on his feelings for Kara.

I hope Zak tells someone about Maggie soon - or she comes to visit him in sickbay :)

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nytel February 4 2007, 16:26:15 UTC
Lol. Maybe she heard you. ;)

I think it's kind of neat for Zak to know Lee that well, because hardly anyone does.

I'm still debating how to address the Maggie thing, but I have a few ideas rolling around in my head.

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suffolkgirl February 4 2007, 16:30:02 UTC
I think it's kind of neat for Zak to know Lee that well, because hardly anyone does.

Yes, that's exactly why I find their relationship interesting to read about. Zak possibly knows Lee better than anyone else does. More Zak and Lee scenes, please? :)

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