Finding Purpose (24/?)

[nytel]

Title: Finding Purpose (24/?)

Author: Nytel
Rating: R

Spoilers: Up to 213 (Epiphanies)

Pairings: Kara/Lee, Racetrack/Zak

Genre: Angst/Romance

Summary: When your whole life gets flipped upside down, you need to find a reason to go on.
Word Count: 5,161
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Comments

[i_am_girlfriday]

I like how this all turned out. So much happened in this chapter alone! It's pretty crazy! That small changes work really well. Nicely done :)

[nytel]

*g* Thank you! It was a very busy chapter. I'm glad it's over with. Lol.

Thanks again for being such an awesome beta. :)

[mlsky]

Ooohhh...I was just thinking about this fic the other day and *poof* here's the next chapter. *claps*

What a great chapter. Lots and lots going on but the pacing is perfect. And it feels like everything is coming together.

Looking forward to the next one...and I don't mind waiting. *grins*

[nytel]

Lol. You must be magic. ;)

What a great chapter. Lots and lots going on but the pacing is perfect. And it feels like everything is coming together.
--Thank you, I'm glad you thought it was all right. There was a lot of stuff going on and I was worried that the chapter might not turn out that well.

Looking forward to the next one...and I don't mind waiting. *grins*
--Cool. Thanks!

[suffolkgirl]

What an exciting chapter! The action scenes were very well done, I was tensing up waiting for something to go wrong, but fortunately nothing did. :) I'm intrigued to find out what Zak's note said though.
Loved Zak and Bill trying to comfort Lee - aw.

[nytel]

*g* I'm glad you thought so!

The action scenes were very well done, I was tensing up waiting for something to go wrong, but fortunately nothing did.
--I think I've been cruel enough to them already. Lol. ;)

I'm intrigued to find out what Zak's note said though.
--*g* I'm thinking it's something you probably wouldn't expect, but we'll see. You'll find out in the next chapter for sure.

Loved Zak and Bill trying to comfort Lee - aw.
--Thank you, I liked including those parts. :)

Thanks so much for reading, and for the feedback. I really appreciate it. :)

[wickedgillie]

I'm joining the chorus of amazing pacing on this chapter! You covered a lot of ground very deftly. And ah, the return of Leemo. Although in this case, I didn't mind one bit because his girl is home :)

[nytel]

*beams* Thank you. I'm very glad that people are saying that, because to be honest I wasn't 100% sure if the pacing was all right.

And ah, the return of Leemo. Although in this case, I didn't mind one bit because his girl is home
--Yes, Leemo. Lol. I couldn't resist. But yes, she's home. Yay!!!

Thanks for reading. :)

[ez_as_pi]

Pilots are almost back together... At least Bill's been clued in and won't be terribly shocked if Lee and Kara go at each other right on the deck... LOL

Seriously, great chapter... Like how you had the Adama men dealing with each other and how you got the resistance guys off too...

I am VERY curious what the note said...

[nytel]

Pilots are almost back together...
--*g* They are so close!

At least Bill's been clued in and won't be terribly shocked if Lee and Kara go at each other right on the deck... LOL
--Lol. There might be some upcoming action on the deck... ;)

Seriously, great chapter... Like how you had the Adama men dealing with each other and how you got the resistance guys off too...
--Thank you. :D I couldn't have them be on Caprica and then not save the resistance. And I like to think the Adama men have matured. :)

I am VERY curious what the note said...
--*g* I'm glad. ;)

Thanks for reading!