Finding Purpose (25/25) ~ Complete!

Jul 22, 2007 22:35


Title: Finding Purpose (25/25)

Author: Nytel
Rating: R

Spoilers: Up to 213 (Epiphanies)

Pairings: Kara/Lee, Racetrack/Zak

Genre: Angst/Romance

Summary: When your whole life gets flipped upside down, you need to find a reason to go on.
Word Count: 4, 715
Beta: The wonderful
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kara/lee, bsg, finding purpose, bsg fic, fan fic

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latteaddict July 23 2007, 05:56:11 UTC
I'm so excited!!! Going to start reading now....

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latteaddict July 23 2007, 06:46:38 UTC
Awwww, perfect, just perfect!

I loved the way you described Kara and Lee's reunion. The way she looked around for him and the looks on their faces when finally seeing each other. The squeezing, the kissing and the love yous *warm fuzzies*

I was suprised about Kara knowing about Baltar but then I guessed it was because of the note from Cylon-Zak! And it was. Such a cool way to bring Baltar to justice! Awesome!

Adama kissing Kara's forehead is too adorable, so now I will have to use my cool Kara/Adama icon from burned-phoenix. Protective Helo was too cute. And I love the way he made her blush *hee!*

Pilots getting down and sexy - yowza! You did a terrific job. It was full of love and strong emotions. It was incredibly romantic, especially with the dogtag exchange. I love how you captured the mood of New Caprica pilot!sex. Your Lee was just so tender and loving with her *wibbles*

I really liked this line...

He supposed that knowing that she loved him that much would take some getting used to, not that he minded the idea. In fact, he didn’t mind ( ... )

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nytel July 23 2007, 11:44:40 UTC
Awwww, perfect, just perfect!
--*beams* Thank you!!!

I loved the way you described Kara and Lee's reunion. The way she looked around for him and the looks on their faces when finally seeing each other. The squeezing, the kissing and the love yous *warm fuzzies*
--I got warm fuzzies too! I'm just glad I could actually get them to this part. Lol.

I was suprised about Kara knowing about Baltar but then I guessed it was because of the note from Cylon-Zak! And it was. Such a cool way to bring Baltar to justice! Awesome!
--*g* I'm glad you liked it. It wasn't something that needed to be included, in fact I could have very easily just left that out, but I wanted it in there. I'm glad that people don't mind its inclusion.

Adama kissing Kara's forehead is too adorable, so now I will have to use my cool Kara/Adama icon from burned_phoenix. Protective Helo was too cute. And I love the way he made her blush *hee!*
--I couldn't resist including the other men in Kara's life. :D Plus, I wanted her to get a really happy ending.

Pilots getting down and sexy - ( ... )

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suffolkgirl July 23 2007, 07:38:20 UTC
Aw, she gave him her dogtag! I think that was my favourite part. Closely followed by Lee not wanting to sleep in case he woke up and she wasn't there.

I have such a big smile on my face right now, this was a wonderful ending to the story. Pilot hangar bay reunion, pilot sex, pilots admitting they love each other, everything was there. It was a very emotional chapter too, particularly the parts where they both realise how much the other one loves them. Very well done.

And it's good to see Baltar get his comeuppance, so that was what was in the note.

I've enjoyed every moment of this story, and congratulations on reaching the end. :)

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nytel July 23 2007, 11:49:22 UTC
Aw, she gave him her dogtag! I think that was my favourite part. Closely followed by Lee not wanting to sleep in case he woke up and she wasn't there.
--She did. *g* Those were my favorite parts of the chapter as well. :D

I have such a big smile on my face right now, this was a wonderful ending to the story. Pilot hangar bay reunion, pilot sex, pilots admitting they love each other, everything was there. It was a very emotional chapter too, particularly the parts where they both realise how much the other one loves them. Very well done.
--*beams* I'm glad I could put a smile on your face. I am really satisfied with the story, especially this chapter. In some ways I'm (pleasantly) shocked at how well it came together, but I guess after a year of it eating away at my brain I maybe shouldn't be. Lol.

And it's good to see Baltar get his comeuppance, so that was what was in the note.
--:) I'm glad you liked that part. I really had no reason to include that other than because I wanted to, so I'm happy that people didn't mind it.

I've ( ... )

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carpenyx July 23 2007, 12:34:44 UTC
Printing this out right now.... will be reading today. I'm VERY excited!!! :D

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nytel July 23 2007, 23:52:49 UTC
Cool! Enjoy!!

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ez_as_pi July 23 2007, 12:55:24 UTC
This has been such a wonderful story, (even when you made me nervous!)

Congrats on finishing it... and I think for me, this line sums up pilots best...

This was insane, and it felt so right.

*grins*

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nytel July 23 2007, 23:54:35 UTC
*beams* Thank you. :D

I'm sad that it's done, but I'm also happy. I'm now free to take a bit of a break from writing (like probably only a few weeks) without having to worry about people waiting for updates. And it also leaves me with time and energy to work on my next big Kara/Lee fic. :D

Thanks so much for reading! *hugs*

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ez_as_pi July 24 2007, 02:28:06 UTC
more fic=good

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carpenyx July 24 2007, 12:15:31 UTC
A perfect happy pilot ending. I really loved this story throughout and you did a wonderful job with end-of-seat thrills and twists and turns.

I am VERY proud of you for finishing it and you've done beautifully with this story. :) *hugs*

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nytel July 25 2007, 11:48:29 UTC
*g* Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the continuous feedback! *hugs*

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