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Then There Were Two (6/?)

Nov 13, 2006 14:50

Title: Then There Were Two (6/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: R
Pairing: John/Teyla
Main Characters: John, Teyla
Genre: Angst/Romance
Summary: The need to find some kind of comfort during a dire war is strong. It is important to build strong bonds with family and friends, but even that may backfire.
Warnings: Sex, Character Death
Spoilers: Up to Phantoms.
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john/teyla, ttwt, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 13

carpenyx November 13 2006, 23:46:34 UTC

*squee* TTWT! Hee! *goes to print*

nytel November 14 2006, 00:16:10 UTC

Lol. Enjoy!

nicole9514 November 14 2006, 00:06:37 UTC

Nice love scene :)) very well written and oh the awful cliffie lol. Somehow i don't think John is dead ...maybe left on the planet :PPP

That's my theory ..nice girl keep going :))

nytel November 14 2006, 00:16:51 UTC

Thanks, it'd been a while since I wrote any smut. I'm glad it worked out.

As for John... you'll just have to wait and see. ;)

anonymous November 16 2006, 03:09:12 UTC

John can't die!... you've got a well planned twist up your sleeve haven't you? Your just toying with us...(very worried look on her face)... right? Eeek! LOL!
Once again, fantastic chapter, loved the love scene. It was beautifully written - not too little, not over done. Great job! Can't wait for more!

Sarah-Jayne :)

nytel November 17 2006, 23:25:10 UTC

you've got a well planned twist up your sleeve haven't you?
--Maybe... *whistles innocently*

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the first scene. I was trying hard to not make it the focus of the chapter, but I did still want it in there.

Thanks for the feedback, and with any luck I'll get a chance to start on chapter 7 this weekend.

carpenyx November 17 2006, 16:56:55 UTC

Oh my.

Ok, firstly, again, wonderful job with this. I absolutely adored snarky Rodney and everything, lol. The love scenes were perfect and lovely. :)

Secondly, the ending... ?!?!?! I hope I am interpreting it wrong, as it's a very evil cliffhanger!! :P I cannot wait to see where this goes! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful job! I'm on my seat, wanting to know what happens! Hee!

nytel November 17 2006, 23:27:32 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And who doesn't love snarky Rodney? Really, he's just way too much fun. Lol. I'm glad you liked the love scene too. :D It's been a while since I wrote smut.

Secondly, the ending... ?!?!?! I hope I am interpreting it wrong, as it's a very evil cliffhanger!!
--Lol. You shall have to wait and see... But I agree, it's very evil. And how stupid am I to post both major cliffhangers for two stories at pretty much the same time? *headdesk* I really should have thought that one through. Lol.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful job! I'm on my seat, wanting to know what happens! Hee!
--*g* Don't fall off.

carpenyx November 17 2006, 23:39:28 UTC

Just completely evil, lol.

anonymous November 24 2006, 03:04:20 UTC

OMG, we don't desrve a cliffhanger like THAT!THAT is pure evil. I mean, John has to live because if he's dead how's Teyla goin to tell him that she loves him!? Let me tell you, if you kill John, Teyla's love, and doom Teyla to being alone the rest of her life or having to spend it with RONON I will hunt you down, shoot ya with my boomstick and turn you in to an intruding wraith! No, I'm just kidding. Without you we wouldn't have anymore wonderfully detailed, sexy, romantic, and juicy stories to read. I am a HUGANTIC Sheyla fan to the core and I will always will be. I love your stories! They are very delightful. But I was wondering: In the first chapter when they first had sex there was no mentioning of them using a condom. Plus he asked her if she were sure and she included her fear of the "problems" or yadda yadda whatever it said, so I can only suspect that they didn't use a condom. But through the months he was gone somebody wouldv'e noticed her growing belly, right? Or did she secretly steal (or tell Carson she needed some and if ( ... )

nytel November 24 2006, 03:27:47 UTC

Well, I do like my cliffhangers. :)

I'm really glad you like the story. :D It's good to know that people are enjoying it.

Yeah, I didn't mention the use of a condom or anything, but you can assume that Teyla's on some sort of birth control. It's not a major part of the story, and that's why I didn't mention it.

I'm not entirely sure what you mean about the 'problems'. She isn't pregnant though. I wrote one fic about that, and I doubt I'll do the same story line again.

I always do my best to get chapters up, but it's hard finding time to write as I'm a full time University student.